Open Poetry #11 |
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Desperation |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Desperation By : ParisGrl How much longer will you wait for me? I can't take this much more, you see. One thousand miles separates us, but with one kiss you stole my heart I knew then that we would never part I can't go on much longer though, being apart from you rips holes in my soul and heart I'm at my ropes end, I don't know what to do I can't stand the thought of being away from you On that fateful day when you stole my heart away I knew one thing for sure, I would wait forever for you And that's all I will say |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope you two will be together again soon, waiting forever is too long ![]() |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Heart felt work....I know the one you love will wait as long as it takes just as you will...all things meant to be happen in time...may you be together soon~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your emotions are beautifully and tenderly expressed... desperation kissed with devotion ... very well written love like this is worth waiting for ![]() take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
I'm sorry but i don't have the time to reply to each of you but I wanted to thank you for responding to a poem that is very dear to my heart......Don't worry Janet, i'll wait. ![]() Thanks Again, Laura |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Laura-- well darlin' my answer is quite simple... for you I'd wait FOREVER!! on that fateful day you stole my heart too i've never known a love that was more true so forever and a day i'd wait for you my love knowing that ours was devised from the Lord above. I love you! Love, ~me~ |
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