Open Poetry #11 |
Do You Love Me Too? |
soozieque_28 Junior Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 28Tennessee |
I wrote this one when I was first falling in love with my fiance and I wasn't sure if he cared as I did because he hadn't said the words yet... I don't think you realize I get really lost in your eyes I love to feel your strong embrace I love the way you touch my face I love the way you hold me tight And make sweet love to me all night When you look at me and you just smile I get so lost in you for a while I love you more than I ever meant to My only hope is that you love me too. |
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soozieque_28 Junior Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 28Tennessee |
Now I know....and we are expecting a baby boy in January....5 more weeks....We kinda did it backwards I guess...having the baby, then getting married, but the point is we are happy. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Congradulations!! hope everyone remains healthy and happy ....very nice poem ... filled with lots of lovely expression!! ethome |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Congratulations to you!! Not only on getting married soon, but for the upcoming birth of your son, how wonderful......backwards or forwards! -SEA |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi, glad that you are having bliss forming your own family..... btw, i like the simple short way in which this poem is written |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I have experienced this wondering if it is mutual many times and I yearn for that day when they say with sincerity...they love me too...James |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
soozieque_28-I am happy for you, for the love you express and have returned to you. Best wishes as you await the birth of your son. Sometimes love plans itself and doesn't always follow a set plan. Your poem was wonderful. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
**clapping with delight* oh yes how wonderful. True love. *sigh* I so loved reading this and I am very happy he did feel the same. Much love to you both from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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