Open Poetry #11 |
But Not Your Lies |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
But Not Your Lies I can see it in your eyes, what you tried to hide, but it's over... no need to lie, any more. Yes I'll be gone when you wake up, gone with the sunrise. I could see in your eyes, even tonight when you loved me, you lied. I'll search and I'll search, but know I'll never find a love like you; but I've got to go... loving you, remembering you, missing you, but not your lies. w. james beard, jr. © November 2000 [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-29-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey J,...so true about the eyes, you can tell huh? Always! Great write, so true, so painful. Take care you. *Peace. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Hey, a darker piece coming from you? yea, well it still holds that softness, and in this piece, makes it more moving. Really shows the hurt of the subject, who knows what he has to do, but fights the pain of the truth. Well done. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great write, loved and enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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