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Tanka, SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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salty SEA receives < !signature-->ocean rain in grays, blues, greens Heaven, earth, holds God sets then in motion all life encompassing family Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-30-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh sweet sweet Sunshine, thank you!!  this is so pretty.......Love this  -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Karilea.... this is real sweet, love this tribute, and in tanka form...tell me please what the rules are for this one.....I like this form a lot too. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is utterly and simply beautiful, Absolutly stunning. I love this one, you are far too good at this Kari.  Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes how very perfect is the vision in this beautiful poem. Thank you, thank you. Your light shines so very brigtly. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
really cool and kudos to the Sea for the Sun writing about her yuh |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Of course ... no one could say it better! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, your versatility is exceeded only by your ability to do so many things well |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful work Sunshine. You have painted a lovely vision of our dear SEA. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA gave love today her gift of words rang throughout Sun rose high above thank yous come senryus loving art form wings higher embracing arms hug thank SEA for her gift as one should receive it back haiku or senryu and thank you all so kindly, kindly indeed for all the loving praise Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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