Open Poetry #11 |
Sunshine Haiku's |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
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Greeting the morning friendly Sunshine a constant Warming hearts each day ~*~ Sunshine showers us with kisses so sweet and soft Freckles left in place ~*~ Sunshine loves gently warm words to comfort and heal we all love her back ~*~ ~SEA~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
What a tribute! Well done, my friend. jwesley |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How very delightful. You did a beautiful job for a wonderful lady. Thank you so much. I am so happy to start my day with so much sunshine. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done Sea well done!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
circe, this is amazingly wonderfully and beautifully written. I admire these so much, I can't do them, I really can't, but I love them. Absolutely fabulous love, I love this I truly honestly do. And You KNEW I would take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful done SEA....lovely tribute. penned with grace my friend (hugs) Charisma |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JWesley~ thank you Startime~ starting your day with Sunshine is a wonderful thing! Ethome~ glad you liked these Marsha~ yes you can, just try! Thanks sweetie.... Charisma~ thank you so much -SEA |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Very heartwarming.And in a difficult form too.Well done. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you sure learn fast...these senryus are very enjoyable.... waiting for you to stretch more poetic wings....try a tanka(5-7-5-7-7 syllable count) some time, will you |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tony~ thank you Kaile~ Senryu, Senryu.....I keep getting them confused......agh! Ok I will try a Tanka tonight, just for you ok? Wish me luck... thank you -SEA |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An honor, I smile for Kaile I shall try now and to honor SEA how you both make soft smiles sweet and my day is now complete Thank you ladies, thank you everyone... Sun is BEAMING |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ Look! You made a Tanka!! Very cool! Now I will definately have to try this! -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You gals are just too good for words. Amen. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I just had to sneak back in to get a smile before I fade away... thank you again SEA... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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