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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan 
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Again You spent too little time In these arms of mine To question their emptiness now. To many words Of mine went unheard To begin to explain just how Each tear I cried Was for something That died Deep within me Buried In pain. And to set them free now, Well I don’t know just how But I so want To live Again. Could we start out anew? A fresh me and you. Could we again say the word “friend”? Might there be common ground Somewhere To be found. Where we Might sit Hand in hand. And speak of a love That rises above The hurt we each caused Oh, the pain. And maybe with time You will fill Arms of mine, And together we will Live Again. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I pray that it you both start anew. Love would be so sad for both of you to loose when you have had it. Thank you so much for this sensitive read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
yes, my feelings about this too..when love breaks down it is so difficult to restore. the love by both must be very strong to recover. good luck. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
seraphin. . . this is excellent. . . from your heart. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seraphin~ 'Could we again say the word “friend”? Might there be common ground Somewhere To be found.' I truly hope you can find that common ground. This is a wonderfully written piece from your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you all. More of a wistful piece, as I don't see it happening. The next months I expect will be full of wistful thoughts, as I go though a divorce. Please be tolerant of the quiet ravings. Thank you again, my friends. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
seraphin- such a beautiful and heartfelt write..  i wish you the happiness you deserve.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You spent too little time In these arms of mine To question their emptiness now. To many words Of mine went unheard To begin to explain just how Each tear I cried Was for something That died Deep within me ================== very well expressed emotions laced with in your well done rhyme... you ask all the right question of a heart at this stage of a relationship well written work take care jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seraphin rant, rave find a cave shout, cry gentle sighs in the end come to friends come home don't roam we're here never fear calm we'll be in harmony this haven your home Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
The strangest things...I've spent 14 years married to a man that didn't know I write. Such a major part of my life has been tied up in words, and he never noticed. Thank you for your words. We are an unusual class of people in that we truly know the power of the written word. |
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