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More Clearly Now |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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I think with age the things I saw Grow clearer in my mind. I see through mists, things then unseen- New beauty now I find. The hawk against a cloudless sky The quick flight of a deer. The falling stars I’ve watched at night- Which seemed so very near. And people? Ah, a fickle lot I see it in myself. The miles and years flew swiftly by And stole my youth and health. Moments savored long ago- I taste from time to time. And how we parted matters not- The memory’s still sublime. The Painted Desert, ruddy hued- I have it still within. Sometimes it helps to set my mood, An old and trusted friend. My saddle partners, some long dead- Still gather round at night. Indeed I see things clearer now- My memory’s my delight. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
My man!!! Absolutely Perfect! Change nothing. Mucho APPLAUSE!!! jwesley |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful piece. Memories are great treasures, aren't they? You describe them well. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I know what you mean! Good one, John! Denise |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yeah I can see clearly too... you have penned one wonderful piece, superb Charisma btw. thank you for your visit on my homepage and signing my guestbook.  |
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soozieque_28 Junior Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 28Tennessee |
great poem... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Slinger~ Yes ! 'Indeed I see things clearer now- My memory’s my delight.' Yes ! Yes ! Just perfect ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gunslinger- ah yes...where would we be without our memories... this is just wonderful.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sir, thank you for this...it's being placed in my library... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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