Open Poetry #11 |
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Of Souls And Shoals |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Of Souls And Shoals We fabricate a life of meaning Often through a life of scheming Make the dust and grime a shoal And often temple it a soul It glows just like a firefly And thinks that it will never die. A shadow of a fantasy Of agony and ecstasy. And I in thought will often smile In the humor of the wile. For I hear laughter in the rhyme In the echoing of time. We of the moment only know A single lap a single flow Rise to a rise of instant high And think we are where essence lie. The ages lap upon the shore Ever circling evermore And dust and grime that is its soul Laps upon a would be shoal. We are in essence a state of more A procession of the evermore. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is beautiful........... "It glows just like a firefly And thinks that it will never die. A shadow of a fantasy Of agony and ecstasy." I liked that best ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: ...only if the sun rises....otherwise.... darkness.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"The ages lap upon the shore Ever circling evermore" Seymour- Excellent writing... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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LoveBug![]()
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"We of the moment only know A single lap a single flow Rise to a rise of instant high And think we are where essence lie." Such a beautiful, thought-provoking poem. Great work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For I hear laughter in the rhyme In the echoing of time. We of the moment only know A single lap a single flow Rise to a rise of instant high And think we are where essence lie. The ages lap upon the shore Ever circling evermore And dust and grime that is its soul Laps upon a would be shoal. We are in essence a state of more A procession of the evermore. =============== wisdom kissed words from a very wise poet ... whose words I learn and grown from ... whose words I adore(the poets as well.) perfect poem for today sweet Sy. love ya jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Always love your rhythm..enjoyed.. ![]() ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
loud, clear and filled with feeling, Sy. Well done.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Thank you for the beautiful. Sunshine, Weather the sun rises or not. *L* Poeminister, Thank you for the excellent. LoveBug, And thank you for the great. JM, Sweet winkiewinkie, love Ya. Balladeer, A well done from you is a well done. Victoria, A big thank you. |
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