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Every Kiss
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Every Kiss |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Every Kiss" I remember that day like it was yesterday Warm late May, spring in full bloom But none of the flowers compared To the beauty of you The pool of blue in your eyes Beckoning me to take a chance Heartbeat quickened, as I stole a look At you from under heavy lashes The smile on your lips Sent shivers straight down my spine As I watched you watching me Feeling the glow of love radiate through me Our lips touched in that first sweet kiss I slowly closed my eyes Enhaling the essence of you Wishing time would stand still Allowing us one perfect moment in time Eyes opened, and the beauty of you took my breath away Sighs filled the room No words were spoken We both just looked at one another deep in thought Afraid to speak, or the magic would be broken Hands touching, hearts entwined The look in your eyes telling me all I needed to know Proud to say, that every kiss Is still like the first with you Still just as magical As it was on that wonderful spring day Even though miles seperate us I know that there is an angel who awaits me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Amy~ this is so beautiful!! *Sigh* love it  -SEA |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Amy, your poem is beautiful dear, the last line really, well you could say hit me  I know that there is an angel who awaits me sighhh "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, Beautiful and heartfelt writing here my friend. May you always be happy. Someday, there will be no miles to separate you. Lovely work. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Amy-girl* You weave the beauty of the first kiss and loves touch with such tender grace...this is absolutely stunning~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely, Amy.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, my god girl! this is great......it captured "the moment" once again. loved it. Love Always, Laura |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very pretty amy, definitely caught my heart! jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you know that Im smiling now...right  talk about a kiss of bliss... this is excellent Amy ... wonderful sincere emotions... sweet with anticipation love ya in love me Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, yes, yes!! Love this one Amy. . . really wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! Would you grant permission to use this in the Valentine issue of Digital Passions? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy girl, this is stunning, I love this one I really do. Utterly wonderful, the first kiss, wonderful, feelings and this is absolutely lovely Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Proud to say, that every kiss Is still like the first with you Still just as magical As it was on that wonderful spring day Even though miles seperate us I know that there is an angel who awaits me' Hey, Aim! Truly loved this one! Very beautifully expressed, my friend! Love it!! -e ~~~~~~~~ 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sea-- thank you for your kind response. glad you liked this! take care. Maree-- well, that is a high compliment coming from you to say my poetry "hit" you...you too are an angel m'friend Lonewolf-- thanks for your wonderful comment! and i hope that you are right. i miss her very much! Holly-- "stunning"! Wow lady you leave me almost speechless with your beautiful response. just said what was in my heart. thank you my dear friend. Sunshine-- thanks for the "lovely". it is much appreciated. Parisgrl-- well my intent was to capture our moment once again. so glad you liked! i love you! JW-- what a sweet guy you are! glad i "captured your heart" thanks for replying. means a bunch! Janet-- awww! well if you're smiling...then i'm definitely smiling. god blessed me for allowing people like you into my life and each reply you make to my work is so special to me. okay i wont get mushy on ya lol. seriously, thanks a mil! Sven-- thank you kind poet for your continued support. means a lot to me, as do you. take care. PD-- WOW im honored! Sure, you can print it...very kind of you. Glad you liked it! What exactly is digital passions. I know I probably look stupid after I just said it was okay lol  Marsha, WOW a second "stunning" regarding my work. I'm going to get a big head LOL. Thank you so much for your always wonderful replies and friendship! Kris, Well dahlin what can I say to you, other than you're the best. Thanks so much for always replying so beautifully to my work and for our chats and for your friendship. A girl couldn't ask for more. Take care. ~~~~~~~~~~ ô¿ô o @}>-->-->-- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The last line finished this poem off rather nicely...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a beauty you have penned here and how lovely the thought that every kiss is as sweet as the first... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When every kiss is like the first kiss then you know it is love and your beautiful piece depicts that so wonderfully. Truely one to remember and cherish. Nice to see one your poems upon my return here. You have grown quite a bit since I have been in Passions and I look forward to watching you grow more. |
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