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spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-11-29 03:36 PM

Misconception

Confused by the lines of communication
Not realizing the ramifications
Of my words left untied
Hanging loose, undefined
Leaving doubt of my intent
The mixed messages I had sent
This world is full of change
And in all that has remained
Know that all is true
Visions past, now not renewed
There lies in each a special time
Of spoken words, and those unsaid
Broken dreams put to the test
So look real deep inside
And mend those things untied
Left to dangle in the way
Of what life holds today.

DreamSeeker
Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 72

1 posted 2000-11-29 03:51 PM

"left to Dangle"

Particularly liked that line

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-11-29 04:13 PM

Spiked~ I liked this....

-SEA

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2000-11-30 01:51 AM

Oh yeah do I ever know this feeling...you could have been writing this for me...or did ya? lol...

Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

4 posted 2000-11-30 09:39 AM

Thank you DreamSeeker Sea and Paula.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-11-30 10:14 AM

Hey Rich...nice job on this! and didja know? In 1990-91--I held the title of "Miss Conception"--the kids are 18 months apart, LOL...and that's right world, it was MISS..not MRS.--and remains so.

But yes, communication is a tricky thing at times...especially in "type".

Thanks for the read...still looking for that sonnet though..HINT HINT HINT...Nice work!!!

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

6 posted 2000-11-30 11:47 PM

Thanks Serenity, Nice that you found my sonnet before
I told you I had already done it.
Rich

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

7 posted 2000-11-30 11:55 PM

SPIKED, well I'm here again couldn't help it after the last one I read was just so terrific...

I enjoy the styles of your many writes...

Coco

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2000-12-01 02:08 AM

Hey...at least I found it.
You know I love you, (and everyone else knows too...I do hope you saved the duet---you are writing so beautifully these days--and I could use the publicity! winkie-wink?)

Many hugs, lovely one.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

9 posted 2000-12-02 02:28 AM

Thank you very much Coco and Serenity no denying what you have already stated yourself.
Thanks
Rich

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