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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Perhaps The Evolution Of The MindSoul Means Nothing In This CorporealMayhem Better Described As Utter LifeSeperating Madness Ripped To Ever Recalling Pieces Why Don The Tunic Blue When the Degeneration Of Disgust Walks The Runways Of Fashion Garment For The Season Garment For A ReasonNot To Toil In The NeverEndingFields NothingnessInspiredRespired Breathe Thy Agony And Angst CompellingChokingComplete Can Anyone Pronounce LifeTravesty Or Is That Skipped Over In The Righteousness Of SelfEsteem The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!Very powerful message here, my friend. You have a wonderful talent to put it in the right words. A totally enjoyable read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I think this was so profound I just didn't fully comprehend it! But I sure enjoyed reading it. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But evolution brought me to this day, so glad that I weep with joy Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Very powerful poem told in an original style.Great work. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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