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Gman
New Member

since 2000-11-16

Posts 2

0 posted 2000-11-17 06:27 PM

I am death
I am your friend
Give me your breath
And I'll give you the end

No more pain
NO more sorrow
No more rain
With no more tomorrow

Come with me
Take my hand
I'll set you free
To roam my land

What's wrong
Don't be mad
After you gone
Yeah, they'll be sad

But don't worry
You'll live on
In every snow flurry
And every song

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2000-11-17 06:53 PM

Gman,
Welcome to Passions. Although the message is not an appropriate one, I see loads of talent here.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-11-17 06:55 PM

Welcome to this Family of Friends.
Your poem was very good, but if you don't mind I'm not going to welcome death until my last breath. Let's not hurry it too soon.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2000-11-17 07:25 PM

Gman,
Welcome! Nicely written.

Poeminister

"One short sleepe past, wee wake eternally,
And death shall be no more, death, thou shalt die!"
--John Donne

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-11-17 07:26 PM

Welcome to Passions, this is to the point and direct. Look forward to reading more.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC