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The Power |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I have the power within my grasp to cause hardened men to weep I have the power with just one word to put a wakeful child to sleep With that power you can learn to treat each other with honesty To speak to one another with candor and sincerity Life and love and death and birth are foreshadowed with this pen to tell a tale of war’s great woes as a lesson to angry young men Listen carefully to the plea I send heed now, the wisdom I impart A lesson, my friends on war you see It won’t have to end if it does not start. Take time to listen to your fellow man with your heart not just your ears And you will live in peaceful times knowing nothing of hatred’s fears But the power is only transient and fades with the turn of a page It’s name is reminiscent of an older, gentler age I am Poet, writer of verse Troubadour of each life’s quest I live upon this earthly plain seeking solutions for each test I ask not for your words of praise nor need your affirmation I only seek to share the power of a poet’s contemplation |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I ask not for your words of praise nor need your affirmation I don't care if you didn't ask you're going to get it anyway. Excellent poem  Could you send this poem to Florida. I think they need some help! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Powerful indeed!!! If more such words were penned; wouldn't life be a celebration indeed??? Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
<b> Sharon- boy, am i glad you had that extra time to write tonight!  this is wonderful! 'Life and love and death and birth are foreshadowed with this pen to tell a tale of war’s great woes as a lesson to angry young men Listen carefully to the plea I send heed now, the wisdom I impart A lesson, my friends on war you see It won’t have to end if it does not start.' 'I am Poet, writer of verse Troubadour of each life’s quest I live upon this earthly plain seeking solutions for each test I ask not for your words of praise nor need your affirmation I only seek to share the power of a poet’s contemplation' yes...you certainly are 'Poet'...and you have penned a VERY powerful piece here...much wisdom in these words. love it!! hugs, -vicky</b> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that is some strength you show in this, as in all your poetry. *s ~Wynter now do you think besides sharing your words..you can dole out some of that power too?  "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for your kind words. But you know the fine print on your registration here at Passions also gave YOU the power!!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Words of wisdom to hold and use...and remind. We can either heal...or we can hurt..the choice is up to us and only we can stop the pain we may cause by never starting it to begin with...simple kindness is more powerful than careless thought...Excellent writing~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
DeVine Wisdom Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, deVine, the pen wields mighty words, but now without, and which first and foremost, should always be thought through with both the mind and heart... and isn't it a lovely country where Forums like this exist...for all... now, BTTT.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mick Hawkes Member
since 2000-10-26
Posts 90Tees-side , England |
Its reading poetry like this that helps me understand why i found "poetry" after 43 years of never giving it a second thought .... thanks mick A :) a day helps you work , rest & play. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes my friend. . . we hold it. . . and it's ours to do with as we will. . . so, let's use it for good shall we? Words to the wise. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A poet's contemplation does indeed pack a potent and unwieldy punch... and yours shines among the many.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Wonderful poem from a Great Poet.. its always a pleasure to read your poems. Charisma |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoye this much...certainly says what many only think. jwesley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is more of a prayer or an affirmation than a poem...(is there a difference?) A fantastic write sharon!!! You KNOW, I believe in this one...big hugs, and lovely love to you... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Poetdevine, A wonderful and powerful poem, bouncing along with energy of the poet's mind. A great write, fully enjoyed. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And you do share that power of contemplation very well...this is erie in likeness to some of the lines in my post that's out there right now called Grandpa...though the context is different some of the ideas are so similiar......this is a very open minded positive write and it exudes the strength you write about.....ethome |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a beautiful poem indeed..enjoyed very much ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
YES! THIS is what its about! I love this, and I do know about this power through poets here such as yourself! |
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