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A Heart's Reminder
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A Heart's Reminder |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
I passed your car the other day. Memories coursing, running wildly astray. And on this cold rainy November Eve. My heart knows what my mind practices to deceive. The achiness of wanting you deep inside. Some days takes everything in me to hide. I tuck my kids in, finally fast asleep. I set aside this evening to your memory, I weep. As tears fall, I've come to accept what will be. A heart's memory, a reminder you meant something to me. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I set aside this evening to your memory, I weep. As tears fall, I've come to accept what will be. A heart's memory, a reminder you meant something to me. Acceptance, sometimes a very difficult thing to deal with. this was VERY lovely... Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Unfortunately, too many of us have experienced this very thing....you have my hugs... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Thank you for your kind words, W.C. Sunshine, I appreciate your visit and words of hugs, thank you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you for writing this one, it's very special to me, it's going in my library, it's so sad and yet so filled with love. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Gemini~ this made me cry......so sad....... Pulls all the heart strings....hugs to you,  -SEA |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Ouch, conveying so well emoitons whihc have engulfed us all. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Those memories can sure hurt sometimes, I know...you have expressed your feelings well in this sad poem. |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
** SADLY BEAUTIFUL!!!** ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mutington |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Irish Rose-I'm so flattered to know you will put in your library. Thank you for your kind words. SEA-As always thanks for being here, you're very kind. DreamSeeker-Yes, I think I hit on a common ground, thanks for visiting. Martie-I'm honored by your visit and your response. mutington-Thank you and welcome to Passions. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
But the memories are wonderful to have, aren't they my friend...better than having not had at all; I think so anyway. jwesley |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"a reminder you meant something to me"....such sad words those are  Nicely done, gemini.... |
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soozieque_28 Junior Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 28Tennessee |
Wow. This is a great poem...sad and yet woderfuly written. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Your words are so true...those special moments alone in the dark...tears on your pillow..where no one can see..we have all been there...HUGS.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
jwesley-Memories are wonderful to have and cherish, yet the finality of remembering someone special is not always easy to deal with. I appreciate your thoughts. Balladeer-As always thank you for visiting and responding. June soozieque_28-Thank you for visiting, glad you liked. Victoria-So glad you understand, thanks for stopping by. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I set aside this evening to your memory, I weep. As tears fall, I've come to accept what will be. A heart's memory, a reminder you meant something to me. hard to accept isn't it...huggzz ~Wynter...expressed so nicely Gemini "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Gemini this is lovely but sad. *HuGS* Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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