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If My Heart Was A Melody
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If My Heart Was A Melody |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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If My Heart Was A Melody If my heart were a melody you'd always know my song You play me so skillfully please play me loud and long If my soul were an instrument you'd always know which one It would be a guitar played loudly in enjoyment and fun You touch my strings and I start to hum and then to sing Whatever it is you do you certainly can make me zing If my love were a piano then you'd know that I'm in tune You tinker with my keys and then I'm flying to the moon If my eyes were sheet music then you can turn my page My introduction is lengthy and then hear the beat rage Feel the rock rhythms rocking on throughout the night Whatever it is that's playing there's no end of this in sight Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Marsha! Denise |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ This is so WOW! I loved every line!  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Denise, thank you, I'm pleased you like this.  Circe, Thank you muchly love, that really makes me smile. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You tinker with my keys and then I'm flying to the moon words to make me smile, Marsha *s thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ I'm with Wynter~ on this one - 'You tinker with my keys and then I'm flying to the moon' Love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I have a song right here love, would you like to hear it?? wonderful Marsha. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Marsha, I never thought of writing to a melody as you have here. [Hope I said what I meant] Anyway, this was a little different, caught my eye, and I enjoyed the read. BC |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Wynter, thank you very muchly, and thanks for rescuing this one too. I'm sorry I'm late replying but.... No if and but's, I'm sorry, there is no excuse for bad manners and, not thanking you for the time you took is inexcusable. I thank you most kindly. Take care Mushy Margie girl, I thank you again, as I've said I have been having a bad couple of days but that is no excuse. And I'll take that hug now please. Thank you Take care Mushy Sven, as long as it can lift me I'd love it. Thank you muchly. Not my usual effervessant self I know I'll try harder. Take care Mushy Bill, thank you lots. I'm pleased you like it. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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