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. . . I'll stroll with you to destiny . . .
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. . . I'll stroll with you to destiny . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Myriad are the reasons to declare, In written form, the vision you present. Can anyone like you be unaware How much beauty you possess? You are meant, Evermore, to be adored and cherished Like the goddesses of myth and story. Even though mortals have always perished Requesting to walk with gods in glory, Onward I'll stroll with you to destiny; Slowly savoring your beauty, always. Such is your presence to me, a mortal. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Onward I'll stroll with you till destiny" Great piece, my friend...wonderful words. jwesley |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ Hello! This is so ROMANTIC!!  Whew! You know how to make a grand re-entrance Lovin this -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Interloper, Excellent write! Nice to see you back at passions. Enjoyed this much. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper--this is beautifully written, I very much enjoyed reading it...thank you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
my eyes alone should not see the treasures of such rare beauty so come and fly again with me and back to the top....wheeee!!! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. Now ya'll have gone and done it. Interloper scuffs the toe of his boot in the dust unable to look you in the collective eye. jwesley~ always good to hear from you. SEA~ You DO make a guy feel welcome. Poeminister~ Good to see you again, and thanks for the kind words. Martie~ My first time hearing from you. I am glad you enjoyed it. Sunshine~ Took my breath away it went so fast.  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
An exquisite write Interloper... Thank you for the enjoyable read... Coco |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is beautiful and romantic. Much love to you from me. http://voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SO glad Star brought this back up for another read... |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I've been to Destiny, I'd rather go to Fate. Wonderful poem!! passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Reading this again........I sighed all over again.......this is so beautiful.......nice to read again.......  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"You are meant, Evermore, to be adored and cherished" LOVED THESE WORDS.....SO MUCH "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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