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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2000-11-28 06:44 PM



Myriad are the reasons to declare,
In written form, the vision you present.
Can anyone like you be unaware
How much beauty you possess?  You are meant,
Evermore, to be adored and cherished
Like the goddesses of myth and story.
Even though mortals have always perished
Requesting to walk with gods in glory,
Onward I'll stroll with you to destiny;
Slowly savoring your beauty, always.
Such is your presence to me, a mortal.


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2000 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2000-11-28 06:48 PM


"Onward I'll stroll with you till destiny"

Great piece, my friend...wonderful words.

jwesley

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2000-11-28 06:52 PM


Interloper~ Hello! This is so ROMANTIC!!   Whew! You know how to make a grand re-entrance   Lovin this   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Poeminister
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3 posted 2000-11-28 06:55 PM


Interloper,
Excellent write! Nice to see you back at passions.  Enjoyed this much.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Martie
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4 posted 2000-11-28 07:17 PM


Interloper--this is beautifully written, I very much enjoyed reading it...thank you.
Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-11-28 09:54 PM


my eyes alone should not see
the treasures of such rare beauty
so come and fly again with me
and back to the top....wheeee!!!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Interloper
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6 posted 2000-11-29 08:09 PM


Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. Now ya'll have gone and done it.  

Interloper scuffs the toe of his boot in the dust unable to look you in the collective eye.

jwesley~
always good to hear from you.

SEA~
You DO make a guy feel welcome.


Poeminister~
Good to see you again, and thanks for the kind words.

Martie~
My first time hearing from you.  I am glad you enjoyed it.

Sunshine~
Took my breath away it went so fast.



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


CocoBaci
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7 posted 2000-12-29 12:10 PM



An exquisite write Interloper...
Thank you for the enjoyable read...
Coco


Startime
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8 posted 2000-12-29 01:03 AM


*sigh* this is beautiful and romantic. Much love to you from me.
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Sunshine
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9 posted 2000-12-29 07:24 AM


SO glad Star brought this back up for another read...
Passions Voice
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10 posted 2000-12-29 01:01 PM


I've been to Destiny, I'd rather go to Fate.  

Wonderful poem!!

passion is life. . . ~Diana


SEA
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11 posted 2000-12-29 01:42 PM


Reading this again........I sighed all over again.......this is so beautiful.......nice to read again....... -SEA
Irish Rose
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12 posted 2000-12-29 02:01 PM


"You are meant,
Evermore, to be adored and cherished"

LOVED THESE WORDS.....SO MUCH

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


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