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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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Her voice begins my morning It's my favorite cup of tea It's the bathrobe that I slip into That feels so good to me. It's the hot shower on my body That invigorates me so It's the fluffy towel that dries me off And sets my face aglow. It's the sun outside my window It's the robin in the tree Welcoming a brand new morning It's the sound of love to me. No matter what the day may bring My spirit conquers and endures Because her voice begins my morning That voice, my dear, is yours.... **************************************** Her vision makes my afternoon Such happiness I find When thoughts of what she is to me Comes gently to my mind. The sun shines down from overhead Majestically above To warm my heart with memories Of this one that I love. Day may be filled with obstacles But they all fade from view Her vision makes me feel alive This vision that is you. ****************************************** Her presence makes my evenings glow And fills my heart with bliss. She has a way to let me know She loves me by her kiss. The sun has faded overhead Now that the day is through But it still shines inside of me Each time I look at you. I love to feel you next to me Your soft skin pressed to mine Caresses freely given make the act of love devine. When we make love, I truly know The beauty that is you And, though it's only in my mind, Someday it may come true. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Balladeer~ this is beyond romantic........like a slow dance in the moonlight........just beautiful.......I wish for nothing more than for this to come true for you.......***SIGH*** just amazing.  -SEA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
'Deer, a look inside the mind of brilliance, does the light in your head ever go off. It seems not. Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh gosh this is so beautiful and so sad that it is yet fantasy for you. You weave love with incredible talent, my friend, capturing the reader and taking them on an emotional ride with you. *sigh* yes indeed, I love this poem for all the love it reveals but mostly because I know well the feeling of weaving fantasy in hopes that someday they become reality. Thank you so much for this beautiful read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"When you wish upon a star, makes no difference who you are..." in this poem, I feel magic still lives! I loved it, thank you for posting this one. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written as always ... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You, 'Deer, are recapturing the crown of King of Romance... keep weaving these lines, and you'll have that bathrobe, for sure! And I truly think Passions needs to purchase more crowns....some tiaras, too.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just log me in with the rest of these my friend, I think you out did yourself. jwesley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Yesterday you cuddled me with thoughts of you being a soft warm comforter and today you blow me away with visions to fill my head morning, noon and night...ooohhhh big sighs dear one... At dinner she'll cook your spam  With such tender loving care  Burns her finger and yells Damn  She's a vision standing there  The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
fantasy's are nice reality's better i dig the last line, though makes me realize the difference between the two enjoyed this |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Please send me a small bottle of those pills You just managed to capture yesterdays thrills. Incredible Sy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
There you go again, deer one...with that romantic stuff I love...this poem is wonderful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ! 'Someday it may come true.' This is just full of promise and hope. Bathrobe ? Take it OFF !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*SIGH* and again I ask... do we need to take a number... do auditions... send in resumes ... fill out applications ... Send pictures hehehe  ohhowilovewhenyowritelikethis later-fantasy-poet-gator jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my, my, my ... just when I think I've read the most beautiful poetry from you ... you take it to a higher level yet again. Be still this heart, so lovely Michael. Many sighs ... captivating sentiments, a perfect flow, and a wonderfully witty title ... it just doesn't get any better than this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful poem, Balladeer! Great title and fantastic surprise ending! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA...a slow dance in the moonlight....I LIKE that!!...thank you! Kethry...it's like the light in your refrigerator...it's always on as long as somebody opens the door Startime..and thank you for such a BEAUTIFUL reply! Rose....we can NEVER stop believing in magic! Glad you enjoyed Victoria...I thank you very much. sunshine....I'm partial to terrycloth jwesley...always a please to log you in. I thank you... butterflies...it would be worth burned spam to have you as the vision Doreen...Sometimes we have to settle for what we can have...for me it's fantasy Sy...I'll send 'em. They work good when you take em with Johnny Walker! Martie...I'm trying to stop but they're like potato chips! Marge..disrobe me and you disarm me Janet Marie...just try me on for sighs and I'll be happy! Kit....it doesn't get any better than having your praise! I thank you, sweet lady Denise...VERY kind of you to be here! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a beautiful day...filled with beautiful thoughts....she is out there |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ah, sweet fantasy, more real than real could be, hehe! Fun read! Sensuous and endearing. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This felt so real, I had to read it again, "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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liquidphantasy Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 15california |
yeah, felt real to me, too oh well |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer, this is so great, a brilliant piece from you and it just glows and glows. Do I love this, yes I do. Wonderful, like a fresh stream, running through a forest, or a walk on a crisp clear day. It is delightful. Brilliant work Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* you are a sweetheart, wonderful words of love and warmth. you are an amazing poet. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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