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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Still days lead days, all long gone by when first you searched into my eyes looked deep and fell into my soul and passed from young onto the old still I mesmerize you you say ‘tis so, my eyes still glow of love and life and laughter fine and you say how can it be so that rare am I as fine aged wine still I inebriate you you attempt to quietly understand this aging woman in your embrace calmly gaze with fond desire at the feathered lines about my face still I puzzle you emotions rampant run within most thin the essence of my skin and deep the well of love to find when you whisper “ come, be mine” still I mystify you know that forever there will be a “still” as wildflowers come to springtime’s hill as passion bends thus to loving will there shall always be the “still” in the still of the night in the silent of embrace in the still of always in the tranquil of grace there shall be this still for you the one that mesmerizes and inebriates the puzzle of the mystery there shall always be the still of me long until tomorrow Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
What an enchanting poem.Beautifully written,and the format worked well. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ Oh wow.....this is gorgeous!  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is exceptional poetry written of love that is constant... a dream of so many...known to so few superb writing K, ...truly a special piece jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Still...what a wonderful word...such a lovely poem....Still Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how beautiful is your love STILL. Delightful. Thank you so very much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tony, I'm enchanted...thank you... SEA, so are you...thank you... JM, that is high praise, indeed, thank you... Paula...still...saying thank you...with a wink {~,^} Startime, you are very Welcome here at passions, and thank you for reading! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
kari, this is utterly totally divine, absolutely beautiful. You really are so inspired, and I love this one, I really do. I'm astounded that you constantly better yourself, every one is better than the last. You are really soaring, love it, wonderful. Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, my friend Kari, had to read this a couple times just to soak in it, and it lingers wonderfully on the skin. Loved it. jwesley |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a nice thing to see upon my return. Fantabulous! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Still. . . I'm amazed by this poem. . . Absolutely wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Karilia--I think this is my favorite of yours...hmmm, yes, oh gosh..It is utterly beautiful...What a lovely love poem!!!!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana, thank you! Majestic Marsha...you're so kind...thanks!... James, twice? triple thanks... Interloper, welcome home! Thanks for stopping in... Sven, an Absolut thanks... Martie...you make me grin...a lot! Thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine.....you've STILL got it! and you always will... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer.....{~,^}.....thank you..... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* soooooo romantic...so beautiful written, so soft and tender....I enjoyed it all. Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma....my goodness, thank you so much for coming to read my offerings....this means a lot to me.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
This one to my treasure box for sure - absolutely top drawer - As I've said on other rare occasions - "I wish I'd written this" and so I say it again: this is outstanding! |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Splendid. So very well written. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats...I know what "top drawer" means...thank you... Dragonpoe...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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