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A Small Wind
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A Small Wind |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Follow my will to the darker solution upon winds that never fade or fall. Follow my spirit to the lighted way where angels fear my anger calls. This silence that has passed our way completes my memories of you. The glances that give us faith were lost on us as we fell down on truth. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, my...you've pulled me away with this... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
This is hauntingly beautiful.So evocative and concise.I loved it. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Follow my will to the darker solution upon winds that never fade or fall. Follow my spirit to the lighted way where angels fear my anger calls. This silence that has passed our way completes my memories of you ============== well you know by now...I'd follow you anywhere  once again your muse the wind inspires great things from you... this is a beautiful bittersweet, melancholy kissed piece Michael ... "This silence that has passed our way completes my memories of you" that is one of the most sad yet profoundly beautiful, poetic verses of grace I've ever read take care poet of the wind ... me Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You have an amazing way with words.  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Excellently written. A somewhat "Poe-esque" feel to it, without the laudnum fumes.  ) |
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