Open Poetry #11 |
The Truth Hurts |
Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
I see past your fake mask I see through you I live my life for me and I don't care what you say Yet I do Why don't you understand me I love your advice and I sink it in Not if you are trying to look down at me Not if you are trying to be my mother I have one of my own I don't need a soulmate I found mine lives ago I see it all Pushing your views on me Your rights and wrongs in life and I'm always the wrong one Seeing you helps me to help you, but do you see me Can you truely help me Listen or not that is all you Listen or not that is all me just know that I extended me hand to you and you slapped it You extended your arm to me and I accepted Tell me if there is something wrong here I hate that you hate me for knowing the truth Just know that I'm always here for you and when you wake I'll still be here Waiting with open arms Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really enjoyed this read...I know how these one-sided things can go but love and patience always wins out over frustration and anger.. I just wish I could practice what I preach.. good writing!! ethome |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You must be married. Lord do I know this frustration. Very well written! Thanks for sharing. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
LL, this is an excellant and really great read. I know of these type of relationships, they nearly always end in tears. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Thank you all for understanding. Yes, I was married and that is where the piece stemmed from. Ethome: I wish that I could always practice what I preached too, but I don't see that happening. I'm trying though. Dreamkeeper: You were right on the mark with me being married. I'm sorry that you have been through the same fustration. Marsha: You were right on the mark too. Mine relationship ended in lots and lots of tears. I'm still crying to this day. I'm sure that all the tears will end soon though. thank you all again. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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