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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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For a moment might one take but a moment brief to think of one, and bring relief worrisome matters, they should fade when cast upon, by eyes of jade to think of one, to bring a smile worrisome matters, then gone awhile when cast upon, by eyes of blue this is then what you can do worrisome matters, tears to hide when cast upon, by eyes of brown this is then what goes around when a circle is formed oh so wide when cast upon, by eyes of the world this is then what shall be, that sails unfurled when a circle of hands reach out for you and lift you up, these moments through so for a moment, for a moment brief breathe a soft sigh of relief so that worrisome matters may fall behind when caught up in the circle of humankind ~*~ dedicated to the passionate poets that care for one another Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
This will inspire other poets to write.Well written,I loved it. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is beautiful...there are just not words to describe how this touched my heart...you seem to do that alot lately...  and yes this sums of the family of Passions perfectly and goodness knows if anyone could do that it would be you! Excellent weaving~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ I think this is simply a perfect way to describe our "home" here at Passions......just love this -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when cast upon, by eyes of the world this is then what shall be, that sails unfurled when a circle of hands reach out for you and lift you up, these moments through so for a moment, for a moment brief breathe a soft sigh of relief so that worrisome matters may fall behind when caught up in the circle of humankind =============== my eyes are brown...what color are yours *smile* .... now whos remarkable? ... besides your muse  another one for my sunshine file thank you jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and this is what makes this place. . . a home thank you my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tony, if I have, then share it...thank you... Holly, yes, all of us do...thank you... SEA...a small tribute...thank you... JM...my eyes contain all colors...{~,^}...thank you... Sven, indeed...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Your eyes shine with compassion. They twinkle with merriment. The eyes of an angel, surely Heaven-sent. Leave it to you, it's not the hue of your eyes that set you apart It's the glow - of Sunshine's bestow that pours forth from your heart. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The only < !signature-->enlarged part of Marge ...is her heart... ...thank you dear friend... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
So eloquently said, Sunshine. The bond we share here shall never be broken. Well done. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunshine-Very lovely poem, even though my eyes are green, I think they would blend in with the rest of the world quite nicely. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is just no hiding your compassion and caring nature, Karilea. There is no doubt you would never hesitate to be a friend to anyone in need and anyone would have to be crazy to not be there for you. This poem...and you...are beautiful things. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LoneWolf...hopefully the good of Passions will live on for a long, long time...thank you... Gemini, of course you do...this was written for all... 'Deer...compassion and caring come easy when it is shared so abundantly... Passions is a truly remarkable place.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
when a circle of hands reach out for you and lift you up, these moments through just lovely, Sunshine *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
For A Moment Touches All Things And In That DefiningWant Answers Pass By Waving Flags Enunciating What Becomes Light Or Denied The Always Bannered Query To Line The Thoughts Hearts Pathway With Every Notion Inspired Not Acquired Write well, shine upon, All That Is For All That See They Cannot Blindness Man is lifted Immediate Unceremoniously We Simply SEE Well struck are your words Chisel to the stone Carve On Carve On The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Pleasant reading. Thank you for including me. Melton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Sunshine, Very nicely done Sunshine, I did enjoy this writing of yours. BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where in the world was I to have missed these lovely responses... Wynter, thank you for bringing this back up!... DreamSeeker, what a response...worthy of its own post...and the thought of "carve on, carve on" places a bit of immortality to the piece...thank you!... Melton, how could I not?...thank you!... Bill, I so appreciate your taking the time to read, thank you... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, where was this hiding, I know it wasn't hiding, I was. But I'm out of hiding and this is indeed wonderful love, as always, and you know I'm always there with my little flag. Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You are without a doubt a ray of sunshine in a cloudy old world and I'm so pleased to have met you through the forums of Passions and look forward to reading more of your sensitive and intelligent poetry...have a wonderful new year and thanks for this one! ............ethome................... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha I can never hide from you...{~,^} thank you my dear... Ethome, it has been my pleasure, certainly, to read your poetry, and to know that I have joined your ring of friends...it is I who should thank you...be well, Happy New Year...and I shall see you in all the tomorrows... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Karilea! A beautiful moment of friendship and healing, brought by a beautiful soul! Happy New Year to you and yours from me and mine! Denise |
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