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Replacing The Rose.
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Replacing The Rose. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Replacing The Rose For you alone a rose I give Its splendour and beauty alive With the essence of nature Combined with my heart's murmur Let the message it brings Unite us for many happenings If the petals wither and fall Remember to just give me a call And I promise to rejoin the petals To make the rose flower once more As our hearts rejoice in an encore Of limitless love and joy For we were meant for each other. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel this is so lovely...And I promise to rejoin the petals To make the rose flower once more Wish you could do this for me Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, Thank you, I will do so by devoting a poem to you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful longing beseeching thoughts Daniel .....composed with real genuine beauty and yearning.......ethome |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Ethome, Thank you kindly for this wonderful reply ... much appreciated. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ you made a sigh fall gently this morning with your beautiful words......  -SEA |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Daniel* This is so delicate and beautiful...just like the petals of the rose you speak so eloquently of. Such tender weaving~ @-->-- The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Daniel...James |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful piece, with all of the life and beauty of the rose you describe. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
This is so tenderly written and very moving.Thanks,I enjoyed it a lot. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ You kinda squeezed my heart with this one. Thank you - felt nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ You kinda squeezed my heart with this one. Thank you - felt nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, A rose has to keep its bloom. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Butterflies, Thank you, the essence of the rose is everlasting. James, Thank you and cheers. Lovebug, Your comments are much appreciated. Marge, Hugs to you, thank you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Tony, Thank you for the reply, roses are what makes love go round. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It went straight to my heart! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Irish Rose, Thank you for this wonderful reply.I am so glad you liked the poem. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice work |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* these words are beautiful and loving. *sigh* I loved this poem. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Daniel, you have found a new way to go beyond the normal reaches of love and then penned it exquisitely. Wonderful write from you and so glad to see your name back in here. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Vandana, Startime, and Mark, Thank you for reviving this poem, I put heaps of feelings in this one because, many people, experience a little of what was written here. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Daniel this is breathtaking loved it, to replace the rose, ahhhhhh, beautiful. |
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