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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2000-12-13 06:02 PM


Love’s Song
Karen Torbiak
July 8, 2000

She stands prepared
having the summons heard
and having read reports
written in her sisters words

Sadness if reflected in her face
as she comes to attend
this council to receive direction
as she they send

She bows before those seated
in the Judgment Room with fluid grace
those whose rank is far above
the angels sent from before God’s face

She is one of the messengers
as were all her sisters sent before
sent as warning with the hope
to kindle love again in hard hearts made sore

Her hair is of light brown
resting in soft flowing waves
upon shoulders golden tan
blending in perfection on this one who saves

The gown that drapes her body
is of the softest white
that reflects the colors of the rainbow
with each move made light

A golden circlet showing rank
adorns her hair
showing the name given
to this woman most fair

Love’s Song she is called
for she is one who whispers to the soul
in gentle melody played
from the heart, sending love is her goal

She streaks across the heavens
with golden harp held near
that it’s magic spark love’s song
in the hearts of men who fear

The trail she leaves
is seen by all differently
as each soul sees the loss
of love’s song is awed by it’s mystery

Approaching earth she sighs
already hearing the songs of hate
and prays she can soften hearts
and change the human fate

She see the colors
of hate filling the skies
bringing a moan from her soul
as to their aid she flies

Black fills the air around her
from all the hate filled war
killing children so many innocent
who witness all its gore

Red weaves its way through
all the deepness of the black
showing pain and hate given
to those too weak of heart to fight back

As crystal rainbow tears
flow freely down her face
she sends a pleading prayer
to save the innocent from such disgrace

She flees high to the mountain tops
where the air is still clean
to prepare sounds of love to send
into the hearts of those who dream

With harp of gold she weaves
the waves of sound so true
her gentle fingers caress strings
bringing sounds of love of what man much do

The sounds of love surround her
as with love in her heart she plays
she draws on nature as she sends
songs to hearts still seeking gentle ways

The whisper of the wind
in flowing gentleness through the leaves so green
caresses the soul with warm
comfort to the eyes not seen

The babbling of a brook flowing
over rocks as it goes on its merry way
soothing to the heart left heavy
from the battles fought this day

The birds singing sweetly
in full cheerful morning voice
bringing light into hearts
that this day they’ll make a loving choice

The patter of rain drops
as they feed the earth and gently fall
whispering in heart’s of softness
as they respond to love’s call

These sounds so pure she sends
deep within the receiving heart
of those who write the words
that lets love’s music do it part

All sounds of nature she weaves
together in colors filled with light
sent from her heart to those of man
designed for love and sent with all her might

With prayers of hope that love’s song reach
the heart she to the stars ascends
Leaving sounds of love flowing freely
and hope that man’s hard hearts it bends



Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


© Copyright 2000 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2000-12-13 07:15 PM


Evening Startime,

Found your writing excellent, and with many words of thought. I thought that it was a little lengthy, but please don't take this as a detriment, for I found it very beautiful.

BC

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2000-12-13 07:57 PM


*sigh* Thank you Bill. I know it is lengthy but when I get the vision ones I just have to go into detail. *sigh* still I am glad you enjoyed it. Much love and hugs from me to you.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


athena4
Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622

3 posted 2000-12-13 10:58 PM


Startime,
   "Love to send into the hearts of those who dream".  I hope your heart is full of dreams that come true. Beautiful writing!!
     Much love,
       Elise

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