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Eclipsed Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Eclipsed Sunshine rings the world loving warmth and joyous smiles Comes the night, eclipsed Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely Haiku, nicely done... Poeminister |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, I cannot picture you eclipsed...ever  This is beautiful... |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Well written in a difficult form.Loved it. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poeminister, thank you... 'Deer...never say ever...oops...that's never say never...darn... Tony, I adore this form...it seems to fit...thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
My friend. . . I think that you have made this form your own. . .  ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you are on a roll with these haiku and i do so enjoy reading them |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, perhaps I have...they are so enjoyable... Kaile, thank you for coming in to read... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine loves the world giving warmth and joyous times comes the night ... too bad Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interloper....I am only eclipsed but for the moment...always to return...{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful haiku.....truly love this one, hope to see more from you. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Charisma, I see I missed thanking you...for coming to read and for coming to share your marvelous works with us... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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