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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Her Grace ... for Liz Santos ...with love and respect |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I were truly a poet ... I'd find the perfect words to say ... the perfect words to tell you ... to take all the pain and fears away. But my words alone could never be enough ... for they could never do you justice, I wish for a word for each tear that falls ... words of healing poetry entrusts us. Something's cant be put into words ... some emotions cant be captured in rhyme, Still I wish to try to convey ... you have a place here in our hearts for all time. I am a better poet and person ... for having known your touch ... you have been a lesson in strength ... we all admire and adore you so much. So many times now ... your words have touched our hearts, your poetry and wisdom engraved in gold ... etched in time ever to impart. When I see your light ... I am reminded of the phrase "grace under pressure" You are our angel of poetry ... you are a gift we will forever treasure. Janet Marie  Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding ... remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie 11/14/99 Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet, Lovely words for a truly lovely poet. You have a wonderful heart my friend.  Parker |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jan-- this is exquisite. a very beautiful and touching tribute to a fine lady. liz, please know we all are thinking about you & have you in our prayers. and listening to this remarkable person/poet (janet marie) she knows what she's talking about. you both are mighty fine women and Passions was blessed and graced the day you both came here. take care both of ya!! ~amy~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Janet...such wonderful words for a beautiful lady...she is Grace under Pressure...and I admire her strength and beauty |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Janet Marie, soft angel wings will grace your words with lift to Lady Santos and her wonderful loving husband Tony... you are remarkable, little one... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Janet: I wanted to write something for Liz also, but nothing could say more than yours did. I just found out about this, and have been praying for her during this time and wishing her peace. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Nothing but the highest of each for Her Grace indeed. . . Wonderful Jan. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
JM, absolutely beautiful, nothing but love and beauty for Her Grace, wonderful writing it really is. What love is gifted to you to send it out to Liz when she needs it. God Bless you Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Janet, this is the most touching poem i have read from you so far....even though you say you hesitate as to the choice of the right words to say, me think you have expressed those impossible-to describe feelings very well indeed [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Angels bump Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smiles to you m'girly, for your sweet thoughtfulness...and more hugs for Elizabeth. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Janet thank you for saying what is in all our hearts. I'm sure that Liz will love this. She is in my thoughts and prayers. Elizabeth |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Janet, you say you're not a poet...you lie when things get tough you goit ...you try commpassion here for Liz revealed by this write prowess is sealed and prayers for you and Liz both are winging toward the sky. Be well and write on Keth< !signature--> Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful expression of feelings for a wonderful poet. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, that shows all the words and feelings that the most of us are feeling .... thank you for that, my prayers are with Liz and Tony... Charisma |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Janet--You are a poet of highest quality..and you have said what I have wanted to say, but I didn't have the words...thank you for your loving thoughts of Liz..she is so special and full of grace and my heart hurts for her. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Janet Marie: Thank you for a beautiful poem. You've said what so many of us wish to say and said it eloquently. *S* Elizabeth's poetry would be stunning under any circumstance... but when I think that she started writing such a little time ago and creates such treasures under such terrible pressure, I'm amazed and humbled... and so very appreciative that her talent graces our forums and her friendship warms our hearts. *S* (And yes... much of that describes you, too. *S*) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Janet Marie, Your words have touched my heart In ways I can't explain It's as though the wings of love Have come to take the pain They do uplift my soul And comfort my unrest As day by day I strive To cope with sorrow's stress Wrapped in blanket's warmth A quilt of cherished threads I feel the warmth and care Each square a poet friend Thank you, my sweet poet For words that you impart THe quilt of friendship's love Will remain within my heart THank you friends of passion You give a priceless gift Kind words in time of need My weary heart uplift THank you, Janet Marie Thank you , poet friends LOve Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the caring will not stop, Lady Santos...it never shall... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
More hugs Lizzy...you know I wish I was there in person... lovely heartfelt words JM... K (though the smile feels wrong...) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful, JM. I think you've said it for everyone in passions in a way none could match. Thanks. jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dear Lizzie...thank you so much for the beautiful love filled verse...let all these replies hold you and show you how cherished you are here...and I know you already know== we wish we could do more than write poetry.. and pray... If we could, we would each cry a tear for you to share and lessen the pain... BUT as a very wise Whitedove once said on another prayer post in here... Praying is not "all" we can do it is the MOST we can do. (see Dovey...we were listening) *smile* THANK YOU ALL for the wonderful replies to this and for your words of support for Liz.. that is what I wish this post to be about... a place to share her grace. thank you to Sunshine for the "angel bumps"  love to all JM |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie~ I love you. I know you feel the prayers from this band of angels who love you and Tony. *Hugs* and more *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply beautiful. Thoughts and prayers for Liz tonight....... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JM, Wonderfully said. May God watch over Liz during her time of need. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Grace under pressure, indeed. Amen, Janet Marie... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This wonderful lady's poetry affects me the same way Janet and I compliment you for taking the time to express this from that heart of yours that is constantly overflowing with love and kindness...I find a very special quality in Elizabeth's poetry that I can't put into words...bit it's imbued with such deep warm humanity....from nostalgia to heart rending pain it comes across as a special treat to me.....and for that I thank her for sharing...I thank her so much ...my heart goes out to her through this difficult time....ethome Love that quote of yours at the end...... VANtastic wisdom you possess....keep your pen moving toward the minds of friends.... [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so lovely Janet Marie ... what a treasure you are to write these words from your heart ... "grace under pressure" ... so eloquent and true. Best wishes, hugs and prayers to Liz and her family, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
My sweet sister...this is beautiful~ Elizabeth* Many prayers are winged your way for peace and comfort to you and yours, may you know that there are many here with arms open wide when you need to be hugged or someone just to listen. Much love to you~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Janet this is more than beautiful for a more than beautiful lady. Liz, may the Holy Spirit wrap His arms around you and give you that peace that passes all understanding. I'm so sorry and praying for you and your family. Love & hugs, Juls |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Being new, I don't know Liz and family, but I do know I can pray for them. I love the way "Passions Family" comes together better than most real families! Praying with y'all, ME |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Grace... the one word that describes Liz. This is a beautiful tribute to our friend. Thanks for sharing this with us. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Janet Marie, Grace under pressure indeed, you have done her proud. My contribution to her. Not to take away from what you've done for there is no comparison. Elizabeth Santos - Love's Shadow Soft and gently spoken Disregarding self Her heart is wide and open Her humor as an elf Her family,… her lifeline Connects her to the pen When ever there is strife time She offers hope again Her beloved Tony Is now just moving on Although her heart is lonely She gifts us with her song A song of life and learning A song of grace and peace A soaring song of yearning And bittersweet release As she's stood be others May now all, stand by her In this place, all are brothers She taught us how to share Shown us of God's portrait And followed with His care Her hand reveals a power so great A spirit so aware As her poetry calls me By shadows tinged by loss I sense implicit victory Love's shadow shows the cross Elizabeth my dearling There's one thing I have learned I am but a yearling As far as you're concerned You have taught me so much I always learn from you And your tender love's touch Reveals a heart pure…true Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you again TO ALL who replied and added their grace to honor Liz.. and Keth...you should post that on its own thread..its wonderful... and "compares" to mine just fine... take care and love to all my dear friends in poetry land jm |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Janet, I too must thank you for expressing here in a most gracious post what these feelings are behind the tears upon cheek for Elizabeth and her family.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Janet Marie- absolutely beautiful, my friend. Liz- hugs and prayers to you and your family, my friend. God bless you. ~vicky |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Janet, I will, but only because I want the thoughts and prayers to go round as many times as possible. write on. Keth. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good grief now how did I miss this one? Two of my favorite people in one viewing! I am sure that Liz would love a reminder of this beautiful poem and and am sending it onto her right now. The response poems were glorious as well. Cheers to you all on this one. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I had to address this one again, as I think of you both on a rainy Saturday night. I wanted to send it to Lizzie, to refresh her memory, on how special she is. You too JM  |
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