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There's NothingI Can Do
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There's NothingI Can Do |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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There's nothing I can do about a slow moving train gears that won't turn getting soaked in the rain There's nothing I can do about that slow traffic light too many cars getting lost at night There's nothing I can do to get that close parking space make them turn off their blinker slow down this damn race There's nothing I can do to make the radio play a different song ~ I have to remember you ~ so I just sing along ~SEA~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This is such a great poem, there's nothing I can do, yes that describes it so well. I love this one, it is as are all yours beautiful, an excellant read and wonderful work from you. Take care  Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thanks Mushy Did you get your e-mail? Hugs -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I did love and I replied, the second one wasn't a card it was a voice mail I think you just have to click on it. Well I hope that's all you have to do. This is an ace poem love, really good work Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ I probly did something wrong, I'll check it out again thank you -SEA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Oh SEA....how did I miss this before??? I know this feeling...but you write it so well....brings new meaning to my heart Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
P35~ thanks sweetie, you always find me and read, thank you so much for that -SEA |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I liked your thoughts in this SEA ... sometimes there really is nothing we can do, but wait quietly in the line of life for that train to pass by. I enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea.....you are so right, it sounds really familiar.....love it ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kit~ there are just those days when you have no choice but to go with it and wait it out....thanks Charisma~ thank you hugs right back to you -SEA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
peppermint- this was excellent! great poem...some things we just can't control. tis life. you have penned it so well. take care. ~amy~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well... you can always kick your ankles and pull your hair... but I can assure you they don't work, just hurt like the dickens! LOL. This is great, SEA! |
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