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Freedom From Solitude.
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Freedom From Solitude. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Freedom From Solitude. ~~Daniel J D~~ Eyes red from days of crying Haven't even felt like drinking Bottle of red still on the table I sat up and wondered many nights unable To understand, why you dismissed our love The stars in that gloomy night above Leaves but unconditional pain Thrust upon my aching brain The search for an answer Has no beginning but only anger What am I to do to free myself From the solitude left on the shelf You called my genuine trust For years I centred my heartbeat Never knowing the fragility Of your instability Ending up all alone Why have you gone? Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Daniel *soft sighs* painful but beautiful. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful work of the blues from the heart Daniel!! Love the scene you set and the painful crying from the heart...good poetic lament!......... ethome |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Daniel, Oh.. how painful.. powerful and beautiful... but so painful. Warm hugs to you. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You did a fine piece of echoing sorrow...this will stand as a haunting question... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Full of pathos and pain..compelling piece.Thanks for sharing it. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is full of intense pain. I think the only thing needed here is to write about it, and leave it between the lines. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How very sad that the heart it left to weep bitter tears when love has gone. My heart goes out to you, my friend.*sigh*I pray joy and love are in your future to dry the tears and heal the pain. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Kethry, Tears are many when answers are not forthcoming. Ethome, Solitude is in every poet, we feel and see it. Rosepetals, When dreams are no longer dreams, tears take over. Sunshine, Thank you for your wonderful reply again, an aching heart is confused. Tony Thanks for your wonderful words. Irish Rose, I agree, writing is the best medicine, it allows the flow of pain to move on. Startime, Thank you so very much, much appreciated. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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