Open Poetry #11 |
Dream Weaver's Snowy Night of Magic(part one) |
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dream Weaver's Snowy Night of Magic(part one) Karen Torbiak 2000 The darkness of the night sky was lit with millions of brilliant stars filling the expanse of the sky as they cast a magic over the new fallen snow with a brightness reflected by the glow of the full moon As she leans back she hears the creak of leather seats in this beautiful red sleigh sent to take her to she knows not where except her girlfriend sent a message that she would meet her there for the party She closes her eyes and allows her senses to be filled with the magic of the ride as she breathes the crisp, night air mixed with the scent of pine as they pass through the woods and into a clearing taking them over the fields of unbroken whiteness The movement of the sleigh is steady rocking her gently as the horse moves forward at a smooth pace along the trail previously made by others as they too were out on this magical night with full moon and stars shining bright The snow crunches beneath the skis of the sleigh lending a gentle sound that further lulls her into a state of deep contentment as she snuggles into the warmth of the white fur that is wrapped so beautifully around her With eyes closed she sighs letting her thoughts drift to her dreams where a magical feeling of serenity flows through her transporting her to a past where the world still has time for the sweet joys of a winter sleigh ride Feeling the sleigh slow its pace and hearing a pounding sound she opens her eyes to see coming towards them a rider sitting tall on a large, dark horse which brings a smile to her face for this lends greater magic to her night ride She notices that it is a man riding towards them and he is signing for the driver to stop the sleigh while he pulls up along side them tipping his hat to her showing her a smile that tinkles from his eyes As the sleigh stops he walks his horse to the rear securing it to the back of the sleigh and then climbs into the sleigh, seating himself at her side while tucking the fur around them both bringing her into closer contact with him A small gasp escapes her as she gazes into dark eyes that flash with a passion and love she has ever dreamed of seeing in the eyes of the man who would join with her, eternally, in a world of man, filling it with the magic and fantasy that only soul mates can give it His hard form moves closer still as he opens his arms and pulls her into his strong embrace wrapping his arms around her and gently molding his body to hers as she leans back against his chest resting her head against him Feeling his body heat flow into her she sighs with contentment closing her eyes, while she feeling the beat of his heart, smelling the masculine scent of him and feeling the soft warmth of his breath in her hair As she drifts in this state of serenity all about her seems frozen in time as they glide through the magic of the night sharing a time of fantasy with the one who completes the very heart and soul of them Again her eyes open to the slowing of the sleigh only to find herself alone once again as she realizes it was only a dream but still she gives thanks to Dream Weaver for the fantasy she has granted her this night She sees that they have come to a small cabin lit from inside with warm, welcoming lights and gentle music that can be heard filling the still night air with a sweetness that lights her eyes with delight With a small gasp she sees standing by the cabin a tall dark horse which makes her giggle with merriment at the reminder of her dream then her eyes go to the now open door seeing a man standing with open arms and dark, twinkling eyes Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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SEA
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Startime~ WOW!!!! You took me there so completely.......I was swept away, into the beautiful winter night........I LOVED THIS! -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ha...ha...I felt as if I was there...and that is good...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed this poem even though it was very long. I am a little nervous about posting part 2 as it is 28 stanzas but all were needed to convey the vision. *sigh* I really apprecate your wonderful reception of my material. Thank you so very much. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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