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When You Hear The Call.....................................
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When You Hear The Call..................................... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When you Hear the Call in yielding declaration, in this undertone of admiration in this your whispering of contemplated reverie comes the dream, gentle, serene, of what you mean to me affectionate is your tone, casting golden glockenspiel if resonance had color, golden is of tincture real and pliant molds your words, comes silky your appeal thus I yield, most willingly, so speak anew your words to me and whisper thus this melody, sing again the song of we and mold the pliant unto thee when faint the dream of you is me Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely gorgeous Sunshine.  *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Listening. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll sing to thee in tones so low That only you and God shall know As, from my lips the words will part To find safe harbor in thy heart. My simple song of love will be A philharmonic symphony A siren's song to lead you through Whatever gates now closed to you. By all means yield to song sweet Until the day our voices meet And blend in one true melody The song of you and song of me. hehe. Sorry....got carried away. You inspired me, sunshine  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this sings with your beauty, as clear as a bell, and it rings in delight. Wonderful love, truly wonderful. I love this one too Take care Imp MM Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow miss sunshine very very nice yuh |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Karilea! Lovely! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Geesh, I didn't answer any of you...I'm a dunce... Krista, thank you... Sven, I know you are!... 'Deer...I did all THAT? Wow...wow... Marsha, you know you are the one that helps me with the choir...thank you... Walt...right back at ya! thank you... denise, sometimes tells me you liked it?...LOL...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like that "if resonance had color...golden is of tincture real." Man I'm learning where all those golden tones come from..oldie goldies, solid gold, gold records, golden hits of yesterday, golden voice and golden notes...ah such memories...I hope if I listen long enough he will hear the call and soothe your poetic anticipation......ummmm softly now...."comes silky your appeal." love it! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, I truly believe that once we really start listening, then the heart takes over... thank you for coming in to read...and for pointing out the "good" lines....... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
so speak anew your words to me and whisper thus this melody, sing again the song of we =============== Almost missed this gem. Wonderful Kari, wonderful. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
So glad this was brought up to the top where it belongs!! Wow........so beautiful (Ugh)  -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine--I love this. Beautifully written. |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
allow me to add to the ongoing lovely verses, can't resist sing-a-long's.. oh honey, can't you tell there are no songs to sing of (we), there is no (you ) in the songs I sing, and keep the ( me ) from your melodies. oh dear, the poem left and I was about to add another verse, (maybe I'll just come back) cute, cute little teaser of songmaking sure from here your gone! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, it's absolutely gorgeous in every word! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"sing again the song of we" Sunshine, loved this beautifully done piece. Loved the above line so much. |
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