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Kissed by Reflection
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Kissed by Reflection |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Kissed by Reflection Reaching out to touch the morning dare to rest upon each leaf Saran-wrapped thoughts ever begging inside, memories nightmare's thief Whisper kisses holding onto butterfly feelings soon to rise Morning dew from lips, impressions mind taped pictures behind closed eyes Once upon a time of loving Princes rode upon their white Stallions all, captivating into the dark, a soul to light The lady sins, becomes then nameless shamed reflections crystal clear Iced the hurting eyes of velvet bruised, the want to disappear Naked now her thoughts before her dressed, undressed no change occurs For kisses only, soft and gentle morning's touch in her, prefers So, awaits the dew of morning knowing where it hides it's draw Sketched in hues in subtle colours shades of bluing cover all Always is a "never ending" fairy tales, forever mores Reflections, kiss each day's story when comes the opening of morning's door. ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-17-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nkedthoughts, waht a complex and lovely poem and how cool is this part. Saran-wrapped thoughts ever begging inside, memories write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
OH WOW..........I'm speechless. Outstanding writing. I applaud your style and skill. Wow........... To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely nt..enjoyed your words and the rhythm too..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
you've captured the reflection of each day in an amazing way, each day brings out new beginnings of an ever amazing story told. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are very astute Kethry, this was more complex than most will know.  Thanks~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love that title..."Kissed By Reflection" it really sets up the rest of the poem so well.. "whisper kisses holding onto butterfly feelings soon to rise" soft and warm "Reflections, kiss each day's story when comes the opening of morning's door." UMMM nice mood makes you want to create!! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
This is light flowing and sweet. its left me all light headed Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
dreamkeeper- you may stay speechless but remember to type ok?... ~V~ thanks again, one thing I do have is rhythm Rosebud- your words were so sweet, thank you for reading ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Wynter, this is a very well written piece, it's a lot more complex than it at first appears. Wonderful writing from you, interwoven with many deep threads. I really love this one. Well done excellant work. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
again~~ the past in present thought this day~~ M |
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