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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2000-11-16 08:50 PM



My philosophy of life
surely is so grande
because there is so much happiness
I wish I could spread
throughout this land!
If each person on this earth
just would be so kind,
to wear a smile upon
their faces all the time
  then happiness and joy
surely would prevail,
  and life would go on
as a delightful fairey tale.
   So when you feel as if
you need to wear a frown,
   just remember that if you don't let it
   nothing can get you down!
   For you see my friend,
   you can make of life
whatever you want it to be.
   All that you must do
is try to follow this philosophy;
   Life will only be
what you make it day by day,
   so just believe in yourself
and you will find happiness along the way.
   For those who give the gift of themselves
   surely will receive
   the greatest pleasures of life;
   friendship, peace, and harmony

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-17-2000).]

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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2000-11-16 09:10 PM


Like the poem, my friend, and in essence gotta agree with your philosophy but it's all those variables in life that really make things intresting...

jwesley

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-11-16 09:38 PM


I am glad that you can live up to your philosophy in life.
It just isn't that easy for us all.

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
3 posted 2000-11-16 09:49 PM


GS,
Well written. I agree with you wholeheartedly.

"if each person on this earth
just would be so kind,
to wear a smile upon
their faces all the time"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

monique
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
4 posted 2000-11-16 10:11 PM




I wish to think more positive




[This message has been edited by monique (edited 11-17-2000).]

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
5 posted 2000-11-17 01:17 AM


well it's a nice thought.
written nicely. thank you for sharing.

kaile
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6 posted 2000-11-17 03:50 AM


Gentle Spirit,
i echo Snow...such soul-baring pieces must be hard to write...thank you for sharing

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
7 posted 2000-11-17 04:02 AM




For you see my friend,
   you can make of life
whatever you want it to be.
   All that you must do
is try to follow this philosophy;
   Life will only be
what you make it day by day,
   so just believe in yourself
and you will find happiness along the way.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
   For those who give the gift of themselves
   surely will receive
   the greatest pleasures of life;
   friendship, peace, and harmony!

~GS~
Love your philosophy on life, if everyone followed it the world would be so incredibly beautiful
~HUG~
~Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

8 posted 2000-11-17 01:56 PM


I am saddened to know that this brought bad feelings to anyone or hurt anyone's feelings by posting it.  I wrote this when I was only about sixteen years old, and I still try to live by this philosophy.  I re-read this from time to time as just a reminder to myself of those feelings.  I in no way intended for it to bring feelings of sadness to anyone, and I apologize if such is the case.  Thank you all.
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
9 posted 2000-11-17 06:48 PM


No, what you wrote is true and how I should live my life. I am the one who should apologize. Thank you for reminding me that all I have to do is believe in myself and share kindness with others. It was late and I just let the darkness into my heart. What you wrote was beautiful and I'm glad you are still living by your philosophy.
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
10 posted 2000-11-17 07:31 PM


I don't believe it brought out bad feeling, my friend, rather it may have helped some clear the air and vent some things (a good thing) and you must remember that with every utopian world, thought, or idea, there are 10 that face lesser realities.  This doesn't mean you can't express yourself, but you must be ready to let other express themselves without being hurt or upset in any way when their world comes into view.  Re-reading all the comments, I know not a person meant to lessen what you so wonderfully said.

jwesley

monique
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
11 posted 2000-11-17 08:33 PM


Gentle Spirit thank you for sharing how you feel
My big comment was a temper tantrum
I don't want to be morose anymore
It's a drag to keep feeling this way
I have a lot to be thankful

monique


Poeminister
Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
12 posted 2000-11-17 08:59 PM


Very wonderful poem and very true.  Life is what we make of it from how we approach it every day - the choices we make, how we decide to contend with our problems, and how we make the best of things.  Your thoughts were expressed very nicely. Enjoyed the read much.

take care
-Poeminister

Sven
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Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
13 posted 2000-11-17 11:05 PM


We should all live this way. . .

Wonderful my friend. . .

----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


bjgupta
New Member
since 2011-10-28
Posts 2

14 posted 2011-10-28 01:11 AM


Gentle Spirit,

I  find it difficult to live by your philosophy because I don't think I am capable of making my  life
whatever I want it to be. It is only possible to live by yor philosophy if  I change what I want it to be to what I can make of it?

All may not as unfortunate as myself. I wish good luck to all so that they can live by your philosophy.

Regards,

(B.J. Gupta)

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