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Them Lunch Toters
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Them Lunch Toters |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This is by an old old friend of mine, some of you may have heard of him..... How about them lunch toters Ain't they a bunch? Goin' off to work A-totin they lunch. Totin' them vittles, totin' that chow Eatin' it later, But a-totin it now. Look at them lunch toters, Aint they funny? Some use a paper sack, Some use a gunny. Them food-frugal lunch Toters Ain't they wise? Totin' they lunches, Made by they wives. How to be a lunch toter? Iffya may emote it, Gitchy wife to fix it, Go to work and tote it! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Now THIS to me is vintage Toerag...clever, witty and dumb-sounding enough that it took a smart man to write it. Hats off to ya here, Toe!  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Agree with balladeer, a very fun piece here, good flow, interesting idioma! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wow, you mean you really have a friend. Maybe his wife will fix you some lunch. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I don't know what to say...what a wonderful day!!!! totin away....ethome |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Toerag has a friend!!! Miracles will never cease!  write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And I have a book by that talented friend... jes' waitin' for delivery to a talented Toerag! *G* My lunch is already packed! LOL [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-22-2000).] |
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