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The Date (part one)
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The Date (part one) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I remember the first time that we met. It's a day that I will never forget. I was waitressing past him in the aisle. He looked at me and melted my heart with his smile. He came back another time or two, and suprised me when he asked "Can I have a date with you?" Of course my heart jumped with delight! Oh he was such a handsome sight... Later, after a date, or two, he asked me "Can I make love to you?" I smiled and said "yes", as I trembled and shook. There in the back seat my virginity he took. Then in silence he drove me home... he said "I'll see ya sometime"... and I never felt so all alone. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh oh you gave in too easy ......but I'm heading to the second part to see how you're going to handle this....see ya there....... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I'm with Ethome on this one. On my way to part 2 now to see where this ended up. |
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