Open Poetry #11 |
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Winter Desire |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida ![]() |
~ Winter Desire~ Birds on a wire lose their desire to forcast winter weather rather preferring, to snuggle with feathery covers trusting the Lord knows best when it's time to rest The cold north wind is a refreshing bite lips shiver and quiver, as I try to speak teeth chatter while inhaling glorious scents of pine Snowflakes fall, leaving twinkles of lights upon rosey cheeks a warm kiss leaves winter desire's to glow A cup of hot cider will feel good going down ahhhh... it's winter How about a nice snowball fight? BloomingRose |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love a bit of a chill in the air but I never look forward to that snow...unless it's the weekend and I can stay home! I enjoyed your poem! Denise |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Snowflakes fall, leaving twinkles of lights upon rosey cheeks a warm kiss leaves winter desire's to glow how can I resist your title ![]() ~Wynter Bliss *desiring a touch of the soft white flakes* "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- ok...that does it! ![]() i'm hopping in the car and heading up north right now...lol. ![]() i'll join that snowball fight... but only if there's plenty of raspberry hot chocolate for afterwards..lol. ![]() this is just wonderful...LOVE IT! ![]() hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
dsnyder~ Floridians dream of snow and snowbirds dream of sand... yep, I am from florida. Bob~ I think I agree with looking for warm covers! It's cold in here Fl this morning. Glad I am not up north today. NKD~ thank you ![]() Vicky~ lol I would love to have a snowball fight, sounds like fun, but after looking at the news this morning, I think I'll stay home! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Loved the poem and really loved the ending. Now how good would you be in a snowball fight with so little practice down there in the south? One way to find out. There is promise of snow here real soon. Far cry from Texas thank the lord. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark~ Hello! Good to see you in the poetry world. ahhhhh, the promise of snow! How delightful for you. I am sure the snowbirds may not agree with me, but hey what can I say, I am from Florida! Thanks for your reply. Deb |
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