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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2001-01-08 11:47 PM


Bombarded by thoughts
Dangling, twisting obscure,
Embedded in the veins,
Tormented, mind oblique,
How can all be merry,
When darkness hovers,
Screams fill the air,
No morrow for to share,
War upon the soul,
Forever goes untold.
Sickness invades the passages,
Envading the very life source,
Feeding, indulging, coming back for more,
Yet to breath
Seems so foreign to the heart,
Heaviness takes hold,
Boldly takes from,
Never giving,
Until,
The end.

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-01-09 08:33 AM


When darkness hovers,
Screams fill the air,
No morrow for to share,
War upon the soul,
Forever goes untold.


this was very heavy and dark...and all alone...

sighing
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2001-01-10 10:46 PM


yes I guess it was sometimes even the darkest thoughts have a glimmer hiding.
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