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Golden Dreams
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Golden Dreams |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Darkness of acceptance had fallen over me Only illusions of what might be remained Until our eyes locked...and you set me free Happiness had been eluded... unattained In your eyes I found the warmest gold The color of sunsets across the ocean Glimmering facets of amber explode As you set my soul into motion Within your arms I touched heaven’s gate Strong and secure, protector from the storm Within a shelter of warmth you create A clouded peace took it’s silent form From your lips fell heat to melt my soul Like falling stars from ebony skies A gentle kiss engulfed me...making me whole Transforming me...as dreams materialize Falling deeper with each breath I take Closer to you as each moment passes soundless Drowning in this euphoric lake Eternity’s promise is ever boundless No need to speak...just look in my eyes As uncertainty fades like rose petal dew Cover me in the velvet of your sighs Free falling into golden sunsets with you If this is a dream...let me dream a moment more Allow me this walk in the light of illusion Upon the emotions of completeness...I soar In your arms I’m free of tormented confusion Hold me till darkness has nowhere to hide Until only the rays of sunshine fall like rain Basking together in the waves of serenity’s tide Where only Golden Sunset Dreams remain Swim in the weave...don't examine it~ [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You knew, dear, you knew...what you would do to me with this piece...and I shall gently place it in my library, where it belongs, for it sings...as do you... be well my friend...and know that this shall be a golden day... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Falling deeper with each breath I take Closer to you as each moment passes soundless Drowning in this euphoric lake Eternity’s promise is ever boundless" "No need to speak...just look in my eyes As uncertainty fades like rose petal dew Cover me in the velvet of your sighs Free falling into golden sunsets with you" Ahhhh ... Butterflies ... too many wonderful lines to copy, this is just exquisite! Beautifully written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It seems we both have gold on our minds, but I much prefer dreams to words This is so romantic and beautiful Each verse melts like the heat of love Liz |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
BDC, this truly is exquisite, each verse is an uttely magic entity, just like a dream it flows and moves with wonder. Truly wonderful Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If this is a dream...let me dream a moment more Allow me this walk in the light of illusion Upon the emotions of completeness...I soar In your arms I’m free of tormented confusion Hold me till darkness has nowhere to hide Until only the rays of sunshine fall like rain Basking together in the waves of serenity’s tide Where only Golden Sunset Dreams remain ===================== Heres to happy endings and dreams come true .... we are all way past due me girlie... beautiful poem of a golden promise ... anticipation looks good on ya me SS so nice to see your name here this morn ... you've been missed love ya me butterfly me Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WONDERFUL*.........love it........this keeper, straith in my library. (((hugs)) Charisma |
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Quiet One Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 46Shhhhh |
Such beauty you describe Makes me want to hug someone, just to go there for a while beautifully written |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Beautiful, my kid! And I have to ask, is it just a dream? Love and hugs, Mom |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Such a pretty poem, full of promise. Lovely are the dreams laced in gold. A pleasant way to begin the afternoon. *Hugs* to you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhh... my friend, you do wear the smile of golden happiness well. This was a wonderful write from you spilling forth with the happiness that you so well deserve. Can ya see the smile on my face? |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Holly ... this is an amazing piece I loved every word I think I'll go hug my wife and compare notes and if she reads this, I think I'll go put some ice on my eye |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Just me again. I forgot to put it in my library. Mom |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Karilea* Thank you so much...you know how much your comments mean to me~ Kit* You are much to kind, you comments are always appreciated, thank you~ Elizabeth* Sometimes those dreams are all we have...and you can only hold them for so long, thank you for your very beautiful reply~ Marsh* Thank you from the bottom of my heart...your comment touched my heart~ SS* You know how good it feels to post a poem and take a dip in that Golden Sunset...even if it's only for a moment. Love you my sis~ Charisma* It's an honor to be in your library...thank you so much~ QO* Welcome to Passions...thank you so much and yes...one moment is worth a lifetime alone~ Mom* "Is it just a dream"....geesh mom there are enough rumors about me going around right now....I don't need another...YES it's a dream but one that I will work on coming true....Love you my mom, thank you~ Marge* Yes, there is nothing better than golden dreams to make the day complete...thank you so much my friend~ Mark* Thank you my friend, and it may take a bit but the happiness will come...I believe it with all that I am~ Rex* Awe....you need to DUCK!! LOL thank you for the kind reply and for the smile both are always appreciated!Mom* Getting blonder every day aren't you Love you!! Swim in the waves of the weave...Not the mind of the weaver~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Only your golden words could have drawn me away from my holiday. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Holly..So good to see you here..This was beautiful, as always..Dreams are wonderful no matter what the color, but your Golden Dreams were just lovely...Never let them go.. Hugs to you.. ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle* Thank you my friend...from the bottom of my heart...Now GET BACK TO YOUR HOLIDAY!! LL* Thank you so much...dreams have a way of holding you through the night so that you have the courage to wake up and face the next day...I shall never let go of mine...and I hope you heed the same advice...you deserve those golden dreams as well~ Swim in the waves of the weave...Not the mind of the weaver~ |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
i really loved this one, thanks a lot! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"If this is a dream, let me dream a moment more." Excellent writing...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Holly, your heart and soul shine beautifully througout this piece. but i have come to learn that is a permanent thing with you. i have missed being away from here and reading such talent and you have given me one more reason to remain and be a part of this family hopefully for a very long time to come! love ya amy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
AP* Thank you so much for reading...I truly appreciate you comments~ James* Thank you very much...and yes, just a moment more would be very nice right now Amy-girl* I've missed you too...it's so hard to be away and not have the time I used to...as my four yr-old told me yesterday...**Being a grown up stinks**...I'll ditto that one...LOL Thank you for always being my cheering section sweetie...means the world to me~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey BDC, haven't read anything by you in a while (*sniff* - my loss)and just loved this! Wonderful write. jwesley |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
No better way to spend a holiday than to read wonderful poetry! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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