On Frozen Pond...................................................(#7)

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Open Poetry #11

On Frozen Pond...................................................(#7)

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-01-08 05:05 PM

On  Frozen  Pond
~~~
I  climbed  upon  the  greenhouse  roof
a  drunken  shortcut  took
The  glass  beneath   me  shattered  proof
of every  step  I  took
~
I  cut  my  knees  and  scraped  my  shins
my  pants  a  ragged  mess
A  few  more  steps  and  I'll  be  across
this  frozen  pond  I  guess
~
A  mighty  crash  without  a  splash
The  ice  gave  way  too  soon
My  belt  hung  up  upon  a  nail
as  I  dangled  above  the  room
~
I  wave  my  arms  and  kick  my  legs
hey!  there's  people  under  water
And  I'm  not  even  soaking  wet
except   I  relieved  my  bladder
~~~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-01-08 05:11 PM

I don't know whether to say "whoops" or just sit here, ROTFLMAO

inot2B
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2 posted 2001-01-08 05:12 PM

Very very funny. I think you should make sure someone ties you to the ground before you go have another round. Also I think a pair of depends is needed if there is to be a next time.

Lady Lightning
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4 posted 2001-01-08 05:46 PM

I liked this alot..made me smile and giggle...so cute and funny..

~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

5 posted 2001-01-08 07:16 PM

Sunshine ... whoops 'l do just fine
thanks LOL

inot2B ... LOL ... I'll keep that in mind

Lady Lightning ... thanks ... glad to have brought a smile

[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 01-08-2001).]

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

6 posted 2001-01-08 10:57 PM

Ruff

tracie66
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7 posted 2001-01-15 03:06 AM

......LOL

~HUG~
Tracie~

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It is the harmony of the universe

ethome
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8 posted 2001-01-15 03:10 AM

Oh you've got to have your own still Rex...that stuff sounds like it's way too powerful.....take a trip and not even leave the farm...whew!

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

9 posted 2001-01-15 05:20 PM

Thanks Tracie and ethome ... glad I could bring a smile

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