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Do You Feel The Touch Of Me
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Do You Feel The Touch Of Me |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Do You Feel The Touch Of Me Do you feel the touch of me Feel my eyes caress your face Do you hear the breath of me Does it make your heart race Do you taste the essence of me The sweet nectar of my taste Does the moon shine for me Feel the glow on my skin Does your flame burn for me Feel the desire flare within Does your mouth water for me Feel the truth not the sin Do you want the all of me To feel the touch of lace Do you want the fill of me To make your pulse race Do you want the whole of me To give you loves' taste Do you want the most of me To mesmerize and call you Do you want the fall of me To summon and hold you Do you want the ME of me To enthrall and enfold you Then Take the flow of me Take the glow of me Take the giving of me Take the living of me Take the touch of me Take the much of me Take the gift of me Take the lift of me Take the best of me Take the rest of me Take the soul of me Take the whole of me Take the fire of me Take the desire of me Take the sweet of me Take the heat of me Take the call of me Take the fall of me Then take the ALL of me Marsha < !signature--> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, Ok, Ok! I'm handing in my pen now...THIS, Marsha...THIS....THIS is Wonderful! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wow this is  ,if he passes up the ALL of you then he is not worthy of you. |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Marsha this is one awesome poem. I can't express how much I like it and the style in which you wrote it. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Slushy, Mushy, Gettting out my dictionary of superlatives. It's utterly fabulous! That you should have created such a magnificent wonder is a gift to the poetic world! Awesome and amazing you are talented and wondrous. This is all true because you know me I don't go over the top, I'm very restrained (Usually by people in white coats)you fly, soar high return, unburned Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
yes....Feel the truth not the sin... wonderfully stated or penned *s Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Sneaked in to get this one as I need it to go with all my other Mushy poems...hehe..This is wonderful, maybe a favorite, No, can't be cause all of yours are favorites..How ever could I pick just one...  I loved this, I did.. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, Don't you dare, you hear me girl! You say to me, stretch, try a different style love. And I do and you threaten to put your pen down. Now is that fair kid, I ask you? Noooo it's not, I sit here, churning out enough paperwork to save the rainforest, and boring enough to turn me into a woodentop. Oh kid You know I love you too death. I'll be good I promise love  Thank you sweetie, I am of the Phoenix feel my fire Take care love Majestic Marsha Inot2B, thank you so very much love, I am growing. It's good to know I have friends Take care Mushy Dolphins3, thank you too, that is one of the nicest things anyone has ever said. This is a different format for me, and I'm pleased it worked. Take care Mushy Kethry love, superlatives, you're alright kid, I've got a little counterfeit ring operating and I'm turning them out by the bucket load. (Admittedly they are fakes and the gilt rubs off very quickly but otherwise you can't tell) Well, you know what it's like kid. There were the lazy little tykes just lying there around doing nothing very much in the childrens ward so I thought get them working. Thanks kid, you know I owe you, so how's this for a stretch of the wings then? Take care love Slushy Lady Ollyne, thank you so very very muchly. I do appreciate it Take care Mushy LL love, thank you sweetie, you know just how very much I appreciate you, don't you. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cool bubbles! this is a different sort of write for you i've had this one dog-eared to come back and read for a while now..am trying to catch up on my reading! love it! hugs, g "a love declared for days to come, is as good as none" -tracy chapman |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ I am impressed with this beauty from your pen. 'Take the touch of me Take the much of me' Filled with the loveliness of ALL OF YOU ! Real nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
I think... yes, I think I should quit while I'm ahead. If ever I thought to become one of this community, I believe I ought to think again. Such works as this put me to shame. Fantastic work... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Mushy! this is great! Love the style and format and the wonderful discerning words that make up the questions! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write...I enjoyed much |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best enjoyed |
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