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slipknot
Junior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2001-01-08 03:55 AM


Why do I cry?
Night after night
Can anybody tell me why
Time after time
I listen to people vent
Tell me your problems, that's why I'm here
As my heart gets twisted and bent
Why don't I pour my heart out?
I don't want to burden anyone
But this can only go on for so long
I need someone
The people it's easiest to talk to
Are the cause of this heartache
I'm going crazy
Do I make it known how I feel
And cause a world of hurt
For another person
Or let myself keep getting kicked in the dirt

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spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
1 posted 2001-01-09 04:17 AM


sometimes we need to share that whic hwe feel and let out that we carry on our shoulders that others put there.
Nicely done slipknot.
Rich

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-01-09 08:46 AM


sighing, because I call this  being a pillar..and when you are the one who listens and  helps support ..sometimes others don't seem to realize  you  need the same..anytime...slipnot...anytime you may need to unknot your worries, I will listen ((huggzz))

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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