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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway 
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sightless I watch you footprints marking blackest pitch clinging to forever despair awakens adhesive fear engulfing transpiring all joy sores sighs soundlessly evil spawn softly whispers dawn of refuge hides Is this haikus? Not sure. Maybe posted in wrong forum also. Oh well... gJ -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
looks like it to me! I liked the first one best |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
FlyHigh, Yep definitely Haikus. looks like the right forum too unless you prefer dark for these. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
enjoyed all... *smiles* -Tier |
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