Sympatico (of the feuding sonnets)

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Open Poetry #11

Sympatico (of the feuding sonnets)

Stan
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since 2001-01-01

Posts 120
Inland Empire Southern California

0 posted 2001-01-07 11:43 PM

Sympatico

Vibrations from the lilting violin,
Will resonate the air into my ear,
Excite the little drum that is within,
And that will be the music that I hear.
But two it takes to have the music heard,
And what about the song the artist played?
Was it sent to have a feeling stirred?
Or just expression of the artist's trade?
Vibrations do not understand the play.
I cannot know the meaning of your touch,
Unless you tell me what you sent my way.
Was it reaching out to feel my clutch?
Your violin is playing in my ear.
I pray 'twas music meant for me, my dear.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-01-08 05:53 AM

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU...Stan...this means the world to me...I love this sonnet---and as promised, am sending this along to my friend...

Every word in this is gold for me.

HUGS you wonderful man you.

Stan
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since 2001-01-01

Posts 120
Inland Empire Southern California

2 posted 2001-01-08 06:13 AM

Thank you Serenity. Sometimes the message of a poem rings a bell. I'm glad this one did for you. The sonnet is a very special challenge. I shall try to write more of them. BTW your accolades are swelling my ego and I am having trouble getting in the car because my head is so big. Shhhhhhhhh

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-01-08 06:33 AM

Bravo! This is just lovely Stan! So sweet and melodic, with such beautiful sentiments, truly a wonderful read, thank you!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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