Open Poetry #11 |
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That special someone" this poem was inspired by a special person in my life (Glines) |
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madlion Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 12boca raton |
The touch of someone But not just anyone But someone special to me Close to me Someone I'm in need of She has the love That I'm in need of Why can't it all be so simple Damn, she left me emotionally crippled! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nothing ever seems to be completely simple when it comes to love...that's why the wonderful challange of it is so exciting.. love another four letter word....good expressions I enjoyed the idea very much!! ..............ethome..... |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i enjoyed the short intense read and i liked your conclusion a lot...thanx for the read ![]() |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
madilon, I tend to agree with ethome 'love' another four letter word. Great write. be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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madlion Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 12boca raton |
thank you all for taking the time to read my writing .....madlion |
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madlion Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 12boca raton |
thank you all for taking the time to read my writing .....madlion |
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