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Naught Presumed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Naught Presumed comfort can disappear rapidly ~ or over time ~ as dependability in the moment is vanquished to a gray existence which comes so very slowly akin to macular degeneration of the soul she wonders what kind of surgical procedure would bring back the zeal and zest that which was once thought as best or was it only what their minds made of it oh to get back the simplest of pleasures when touch was treasured when comfort was found in the smile when a day could pass in light when nothing was taken for granted but the electric is gone words are sodden ~ regret most plentiful ~ 'tho smiles are given publicly in light just not during night when it would be best how did this come to pass? he said thoughts aloud she kept thoughts quietly proud and kept his words before her and noted shorter apologies but longer analogies of all things gone wrong wondering when naught became presumed 01.07.01 [Just saw the movie CastAway...which led to these thoughts....] Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
WOW! Wonderful words here Karilea, tinged with a sadness and regret that is palpable ... wonderful writing!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This speaks to me, and I love it. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ What an inspired piece of writing. Very nicely done, poet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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