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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-01-07 06:53 PM


(repost and redone from DP)


I see myself sliding
into a pool of rose petals.
Silky, exquisitely soft
they caress my skin.
Scarlet and mauve stains of love
color me.
I am surrounded
by intoxicating fragrance.
I am immersed in cool, delicious, seductive,
intricate bits of breathless flowers.
If you pass by
at just the right time
you can join me...


© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
athena4
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since 2000-12-10
Posts 622

1 posted 2001-01-07 07:01 PM


Sandra,
    I know your Prince will join you in that Rose Petal fantasy of beauty. Hold on to that dream, and never let go...
         Love, Elise

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
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2 posted 2001-01-07 07:47 PM


I seem to remember reading this before.....
hmmmm... could it have been in DP? I NEVER go to THAT forum.
I just had to respond again. Great imagery.
Give me a hint, what time is the right time?
Ian


Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Victoria
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3 posted 2001-01-07 07:53 PM


yes i will join you ha...sounds lovely sandra..beautiful images

                 ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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4 posted 2001-01-07 08:22 PM


Oh.......best friend........you have written one that is so lovely, and paints such beautiful pictures in this mind!! How I love to read your thoughts......this one is so perfect!!
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Write on!
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[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-07-2001).]

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