Open Poetry #11 |
Rose Petal Dreams |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
(repost and redone from DP) I see myself sliding into a pool of rose petals. Silky, exquisitely soft they caress my skin. Scarlet and mauve stains of love color me. I am surrounded by intoxicating fragrance. I am immersed in cool, delicious, seductive, intricate bits of breathless flowers. If you pass by at just the right time you can join me... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, I know your Prince will join you in that Rose Petal fantasy of beauty. Hold on to that dream, and never let go... Love, Elise |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
I seem to remember reading this before..... hmmmm... could it have been in DP? I NEVER go to THAT forum. I just had to respond again. Great imagery. Give me a hint, what time is the right time? Ian Sing while you may -The Prophet Qa'sepel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Qa'sepel |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes i will join you ha...sounds lovely sandra..beautiful images ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh.......best friend........you have written one that is so lovely, and paints such beautiful pictures in this mind!! How I love to read your thoughts......this one is so perfect!! < !signature-->Write on! -<--<--{(@ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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