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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Somewhere in your heart my love lies waiting... Deep within a room that you can't see... You're so afraid to know, just how deep that love can go... That you locked it up and threw away the key... But you don't know the power of emotion... You think that every lover is the same... and you don't even see what waits on bended knee... You can't judge honest love by childish games... So, I'll just wait right here until you're ready... Just go out there and have yourself a ball... Yes, I'll be standing by...on my shoulder you can cry... I'm strong enough to lift you when you fall... I've waited for real love throughout my lifetime... Sometimes I feel as ancient as the sea... Many times I've wondered, shed my tears while this I pondered... Is there someone out there who waits for me? I had originally posted a graphic with this picture that was fine when posted, but when viewed by members at Passions, took too much time to load. If anyone is curious as to what the picture looked like, email me, and I will send you your own copy. Thank you!! < !signature--> Write on! -<--<--{(@ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
My friend, this is spectacular. Sounds a little sad, and filled with longing. You know I understand. Beautiful picture, also. Did you create it? S |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ This is lovely~ The title is most fitting, as it took forever for it to load. Soooooooo, while I was Waiting ... it did give me an opportunity to read it slowly. (Tee-Hee) I even refreshed three times. Hmmmmmm ! Wonderful sentiments expressed from that heart of yours. Love n' hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this muchly and miranda background. Beautifully written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ hi 'S' ~~~ I thought that you might like this one as much as I did writing it. I will be emailing shortly...in my 'free' time!!  ~~~ Marge ~~~ The graphic has been deleted. Thank you for reading. ~~~ Poeminister ~~~ I thank you for visiting today, and good to see that you got the picture in. It just seemed to fit the words, and 'miranda', although beautiful, was too large to keep here. thank you, my friend!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunny, this poem is so heartbreakingly poignant and yet it rings true. Absolutely splendiferous! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ hi Kethry ~~~ Oh.......I love that big word: "splendiforous"!!!!! And thank you so much for giving this poem a read, my good friend. Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunny, the someones who would wait for you could fill MAdison Square Garden!!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I will agree with 'Deer...they would be there not only for you, and your poetry, but your music as well!... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
He would be a fool to keep you waiting long dear twin...this is exquisite |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Mr. 'Deer ~~~ You are so sweet......I thank you, and flattery will get you...........? ~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Oh......this heart is so grateful to have friends like you......I would be so thrilled to play in Madison Square Garden...just like a non-reachable dream come true!! ~~~ Paula ~~~ Thank you, my twin, and you know how much I look forward to your replies!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
even if there numbers are few those few men will always await you Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
even if their numbers are few those few men will always await you Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
must be true-- it posted twice...lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ hi Jamie ~~~ You can post replies as many times as you like, my friend......from you, they are always a welcome sight!! Thank you!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
some say waiting makes for too much wasted time...i dont believe in wasted time..its all a learning experience..and i say if i feel it in my soul, its worth the waiting..  very real, very wonderful poem.. hugs, g "there is no 'best' in a world of individuals" -unknown |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ hi 'g' ~~~ I share a similar philosophy with you....anything that one chooses to put effort into in life, is never wasted effort. And sometimes the wait is definitely worth it!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Somewhere in your heart my love lies waiting... sounds like a beautiful song, Sunny1 ~Wynter... "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sometimes I feel as ancient as the sea... boy I know how this feels "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Wynter ~~~ Yes.....it may turn into a song, and I thank you for the idea!! ~~~ Irish Rose ~~~ We are of the Earth, and the Earth is ancient, so I suppose we are, in reality, ancient ourselves!! Thank you, my friend!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a lovely write...wish I could have seen the graphic |
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