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Open Poetry #11

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-01-07 04:11 PM

Whispering winter morning,
Filled with filtered frost,
Show faceless moon,
What it has lost.
From wave to wave,
On covered wings,
Rant above,
Of night time sing.
Prove proud the enduring hours,
For they shall be your best reward.

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-01-07 06:11 PM

Very nice images..
I especially liked the line about the moon..
Sandra

*Majestria*
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 7

2 posted 2001-01-07 06:42 PM

This is a very pretty poem.
I like it very much.
Nice work!!!!!!!

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2001-01-07 06:54 PM

Jenn, you're not so bad of a reward yourself....beautiful images

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-01-07 09:11 PM

catalinamoon,
Thanks! The moon is my favorite.

Majestria,
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it!

Balladeer,
Thank you kindly for your compliments, sir.

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-01-08 08:50 PM

just like this poem. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-01-08 09:01 PM

Sought..................................Found

Liked!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2001-01-09 02:04 AM

Sven and Sunshine,
Thank you both. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

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