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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Whispering winter morning, Filled with filtered frost, Show faceless moon, What it has lost. From wave to wave, On covered wings, Rant above, Of night time sing. Prove proud the enduring hours, For they shall be your best reward. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice images.. I especially liked the line about the moon.. Sandra |
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*Majestria* New Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 7 |
This is a very pretty poem. I like it very much. Nice work!!!!!!!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Jenn, you're not so bad of a reward yourself....beautiful images |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
catalinamoon, Thanks! The moon is my favorite. Majestria, Thank you. I'm glad you liked it! Balladeer, Thank you kindly for your compliments, sir. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just like this poem. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sought..................................Found Liked! |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sven and Sunshine, Thank you both. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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