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monique
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Louisiana

0 posted 2001-01-07 12:52 PM


I am very naive and gullible twice
I wonder why God created the universe
I hear the sounds of sex creating more unwanted babies
I see myself in lloovvee praying
I want to be able to write my heart out
i am very naive and gullible twice


I pretend that I am single and can go visit my home-town
I feel lost in the lies of the lure
I touch the truth once
I worry to die before my handicap children
I cry when I see them suffer
I am very naive and gullible twice

I understand that I am a mistake from my parents    
  and do not try to tell me otherwise
I say Jesus must be the Way the Truth and the Life
I dream to be somewhere else
I try to be a better person but fail too much
I hope He will come back soon
I am very naive and gullible twice

And I am very lucky to have a good husband
Who puts up with all my foolishness



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Sven
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1 posted 2001-01-07 01:25 PM


wow. . . I really like this one from you monique. . .it's very profound and deep. . . I'm always amazed by the depth of your writing, and this is why. . .

excellent. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2001-01-07 01:29 PM


We're all naive and gullible, until we get bitter.
Home is where you're rooted, I've been to Quebec, it's very old and beautiful, but I found most of its hearts, stone cold.
There's no place like home, especially to a warm heart like yours.
God knew that those children of yours were going to need a very special mother, one with great strengths and kindness, one who could 'persevere'
He chose you.
Mistake of your parents? ... perhaps
Gift from God? .... perhaps
Mistake in God's master plan? ... I don't think so


RobertB
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3 posted 2001-01-07 05:23 PM


I really like this......I really do
misscris
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4 posted 2001-01-07 05:48 PM


Someone once told me that if, in my whole entire life I only made one person smile, then my life had meaning, even if it was just to make that one person smile at that very moment....that puts most of us ahead of the game, don't you think?
misscris

monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
5 posted 2001-01-08 02:19 PM


Sven, i do not want to tear up your compliment but "very profound and deep"?
i feel very shallow and deep yes into sin

Rex, God's plan? he does mention evil children and sometime i wonder if i am one of them.

RobertB, where have you been?

Misscris, smile? yes i can make people smile and i can ruin a compliment too, but i will stop today i need to just say thank you very much but i wanted to show how i really feel,
and sometime maybe it is better not to show and just go on with the flow of the love you all pouring over me, i can feel all the good vibes, thank you!

monique

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-04-19 04:16 AM


nice to meet you
monique
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7 posted 2004-04-19 08:29 PM


wow! Passing Shadows, are you trying to raise me from the dead.
I was surprise to see a notification in my e-mail box, nice to meet you too

moniquew

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