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My Storm
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My Storm |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
My Storm Clouding in my mind obscures my thoughts fantasy and reality fact and fiction are blurred in the mist trying to decipher actuality, authenticity becoming more difficult as the skies darken around my storm the roaring clap of thunder drowns out the sound of as if he could have loved me… Annie Lehberg 11-21-00 Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Touching last line, from a wonderful poem.Thanks for sharing. Regards, Olias |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If only he would...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Annie, don't think me cruel when I say I love a good storm but even I realize that some storms would be better off not being felt. Loved the way you poured yourself into this one with so much said and yes, if only he would. Sounds like he needs to wake up and take notice of what is behind the cloulds to me. If only he could see what we see, then I think your storm would have a rainbow added to it very soon. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The strength sounds loudly here... well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
The Eye Holds Peace To Soothe The I Whirlwinds May Surround But Never Touch The Eye Of Every Storm Holds Fast Inpenetrable Unremitting Undeniable The True I |
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