Carved Into Forever...(1000th... oops plus)

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-01-07 11:07 AM

(a blend of thoughts, for my 1000th post as ~Wynter)

Carved Into Forever...

Moments pass, attempting to form
thoughts of forever, the magic of you
days that deepen, bathed in dawn's light
behind all the morrows, spilled passions of two.

Turning a verse, draping in twist
laid in the splendour, etched in sublime
shedding my Wynter, virtual of course,
grasping of life's definition in rhyme.

Speaking in trust, exploring in feel
emotions,  images, dreams in my quest,
huntress becoming, desires fall prey
as twilight descends, to a state of suggest.

Hunger of heart, designed destiny
visions to hold, forever be real,
seeking eternal, replenish in love
forged, compressed into memories of steel.

Another day opens, to journey the past,
scenes of surrendering, surge from this mind,
Bestowing my heart, swept in your strength
canvassed before you, naked, a find.

Outlined in touches, softness creates
in pleasure attended, silhouetted in bliss,
laced before me, your fingers to trace
the women inside me, painted by kiss.

To dream of your colours, encircled by swirls
yields forth to cast me, sustain me in flight,
a spirit of moonchild,  kaleidoscope in form,
Unfolds to forever,  my versed world of night.

One thousand forevers, each pressed into heart
endlessly held, warmed in my keep
for when darkness invades, dissolving the light
the presence of forevers, shall take me to sleep.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-01-07 11:19 AM

great positive message, and congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-01-07 11:28 AM

wonderful celebration with these beautiful poem...*CONGRATULATIONS* with your 1000th

hope to read many more from your hands.

((hugs))
Charisma

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-01-07 11:29 AM

Wynter~
Child of the moon you are
Graced with splendid verse.

Congratulations, my friend.
Beautifully done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-01-07 12:29 PM

Kathleen, Charisma, and Marge..thank you...

I was trying to be positive today *s..the sun is shining and the world is melting it's cold ...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-01-07 12:33 PM

Congratulations wynter..the sun is shining here too and the snow is melting..and i still have my darn cold ha..HUGS

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2001-01-07 12:44 PM

Congrats on your 1000th (plus...again)lol and thank you for sharing a piece as wonderfully uplifting as this. It is nice to see you smiling these days. You wear it well.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-01-07 01:59 PM

wonderful Wynter. . . this is truly a look into your heart. . . which is growing warmer every day. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-01-07 02:08 PM

Enjoyed reading Wynter...congratulations on 1000 posts...James

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-01-07 05:52 PM

Wynter, congrats on 1000, and you have outdone yourself here. There are so many passages that spoke to me.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-01-08 12:50 PM

thank you ~V~ hope your cold is better

..and Mark thank you for warming my chilled heart...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2001-01-08 08:57 PM

Evening Wynter,

Would like to congratulate you on over 1000. Then let me congratulate you on this writing, which you have excelled at. A lot of meaning here Wynter, and it comes out with your pen.

BC

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2001-01-09 01:21 AM

Mark- that smile..well it comes and goes like the snow we are having this week, sometimes it's almost gone, melted and absorbed into the landscape and then it surprises and floats happiness to earth again * not sure thatmakes sense to you..or to me for that matter *s

Sven- thank you for that kind response...today was a tough one..tomorrow shall improve *s

James- thank you for the congrats...I almost didn't realize I had reached that 1000...

huggzz to all of you
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2001-01-09 07:30 PM

Sandra and Bill thank you both for your words of congratulations..*s...I am glad you enjoyed the poem...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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