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Lay Me Down My Love
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Lay Me Down My Love |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Lay Me Down My Love Lay me down my love and summon me Touch me with your essence Hold me and fulfill me Fill my spaces with silence Fall into me Tumble me down my love and fill me Enchanter of my sighs Stroke me and soften me Call forth my soaring highs Move into me Take me down my love enlighten me Play the music of my heart Bathe and delight me Conduct the sighs apart Fly into me Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
this poem sent my head spining. The words say to me that you give all of you to your mate. What a wonderful poem. I loved it. Love and light, Richard |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
If I did I'd die in bliss with multible strokes or at least need a heart implant  Oh Oh here comes my wife ... hide this!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful Marsha... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Tumble me down my love and fill me Enchanter of my sighs" I love the flow of this, soft and enchanting...very beautiful...nicely written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marsha love. . . this is just. . . wow. . . *whew*. . . well, let's just say that it's very. . . trying to be succinct*. . . passionate  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ There is such a soft beauty to this piece. It may well become my favorite of yours - SO FAR ! I really like it, love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard love, I do love I do, I am never half hearted love not in anything. Thank you love, Take care kid Mushy Rex, I don't want you keeling over love, maybe I'd better have the resus team on alert? Thank you love Take care Mushy Wynter love, thank you, a change for me, I know, the style isn't something I've tried much. (But I'm doing the less is more lessons at the moment) Take care Mushy Poeminister, thank you very muchly love, I do appreciate it Take care Mushy Sven love, so you like? thank you muchly, see what the sisterhood have been teaching me. (It's alright we don't gather and incant spells or anything) But the idea is to reflect the heat, not coat it in too many words. And Kari's right it works far better, although I still have to restrain myself to add embellishment. Thanks again kid Take care love Mushy Margie girl, thank you love, that is the nicest thing, I really pleased. And as I say I found it easier than I expected Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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